Wow, those kids learn fast!

I noticed something in chapter 4 which I think might be a typo? It says;

'Albus saw his Fred look over at James, and saw James shrug as if to say, "New year, new pranks!"'

I'm guessing "his Fred" is a mistake? Although it would be really cute for Albus to think of him as his Fred!

Anyway, back to the story! You've definitely kept my attention! The characters are all very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of them, especially Fred and Cormac. (And was that a spark of Hermione-and-Ron-like chemistry that we saw there between Scorpius and Rose in Potions? Ha, chemistry in Potions!)

Oh and another by the way; in the review section it say you can review chapter 7, but that doesn't come up in the table of contents...

Great stuff! Looking forward to the next installment!

Author's Response:

I fixed the typo and now Chapter seven is up!

SLy 

Well I know for a fact that Albus will be great, not that he is Harry Potter's son, but because he is just truely ... intelligent and gifted althought he doesn't know himself as yet

Surihya

Author's Response:

He willl be great but he's going to fight it kicking and screaming the WHOLE way!

SLy 

I like this story so far, I hope you're able to update soon. The conversation with Ollivander was interesting and I'm anxious to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

Yeah it was interesting and a bit creepy too LOL!

SLy 

aw that weas soo good very intense i love how Albus took charge like that and then when it was over aw great job. Hopefully you can update soon.

Author's Response:

Some people a born to greatness and some have it thrust upon them...its still up in the air about Albus!

SLy 

great chapter. I liked the conversation at the end about the brooms it sounded so real with all the terminology excellent job.

Author's Response:

That wasn't an entirely throw away conversation...but you didn't hear that from me. ;)

SLy 

the second to last paragraph where you describe their first sight of the castle almost made me cry because it was so beautiful and descriptive. Excellent job you're an amazing writer.

Author's Response:

Thank my beta's for kicking it around and making it more concise! Glad you enjoyed it so much.

SLy 

Thank you for the update, and I look forward to reading more. I like how Albus was given a chance demonstrate his wand's power. Please update when you can. Thanks again.

Author's Response:

I hope to!

SLy 

Thank you so much for the update, and I was very surprised at Professor Flint's attitude in the classroom. He seemed to care about his students, and to disregard family ties. I really am looking forward to the next update. One last note, it is awesome how the story takes a different turn from Albus and Scorpius being sorted into Hufflepuff rathe than Gryffindor or Slytherin.

Author's Response:

Yes I am so glad that twisted plot bunny hippity hopped into my life!  Professor Flint intrigues me as well...he's not a pure blood elitest but rather a Gregor Medelesque geneticist.

Glad you are enjoying this!

SLy 

another great chapter.....as usual!!! i LOVED the whole thing about Cedric!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, just trying to get a sense of Hufflepuff history. I don't think the 'puffs would get over Ced's death without some sort of memorial. And what Dumbledore said about him was so profound it made for some good advice. Anyway glad you like it.

SLy 

Good beginning. I like these kids and want to read more about them. What more can an author ask? :-)

Author's Response:

I'm glad people are caring...that gets hairy sometimes but better than the alternative! LOL! Keep reading and enjoying!

SLy