Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 08/11/08 9:13
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

ooh I like it!!

Author's Response:

Glad you do! I like reviews myself! (hint! hint!)

SLy 

Reviewer: Hufflepuff at heart
Date: 08/04/08 11:39
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

Wow, those kids learn fast!

I noticed something in chapter 4 which I think might be a typo? It says;

'Albus saw his Fred look over at James, and saw James shrug as if to say, "New year, new pranks!"'

I'm guessing "his Fred" is a mistake? Although it would be really cute for Albus to think of him as his Fred!

Anyway, back to the story! You've definitely kept my attention! The characters are all very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of them, especially Fred and Cormac. (And was that a spark of Hermione-and-Ron-like chemistry that we saw there between Scorpius and Rose in Potions? Ha, chemistry in Potions!)

Oh and another by the way; in the review section it say you can review chapter 7, but that doesn't come up in the table of contents...

Great stuff! Looking forward to the next installment!

Author's Response:

I fixed the typo and now Chapter seven is up!

SLy 

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 08/03/08 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

This story is excellent.
I have just added it into my favourites.
The way the you have written the new 'dream team' is convincing and enjoyable, with just the right amount of humour.
Keep it up, I am thoroughly enjoying it.
Any clues on any ships there will be in this fiction?
*sh*

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you like them! I sincerely hope that I continue keep your interest!

SLy

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/29/08 13:33
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

Well I know for a fact that Albus will be great, not that he is Harry Potter's son, but because he is just truely ... intelligent and gifted althought he doesn't know himself as yet

Surihya

Author's Response:

He willl be great but he's going to fight it kicking and screaming the WHOLE way!

SLy 

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 07/28/08 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

Wow how cool is this
albus is my favourite =]=]
aha.

MORE!!!

Author's Response:

Glad you found me...hope you spread the word about this story for me!  :)

SLy 

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 07/27/08 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

I like this story so far, I hope you're able to update soon. The conversation with Ollivander was interesting and I'm anxious to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

Yeah it was interesting and a bit creepy too LOL!

SLy 

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006
Date: 07/27/08 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

AWWW!!! POOR ALBIE!!!

Author's Response:

Poor bludger LOL! Thanks for reading.

SLy 

Reviewer: Always_Obsessed
Date: 07/27/08 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

aw that weas soo good very intense i love how Albus took charge like that and then when it was over aw great job. Hopefully you can update soon.

Author's Response:

Some people a born to greatness and some have it thrust upon them...its still up in the air about Albus!

SLy 

Reviewer: Always_Obsessed
Date: 07/27/08 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 5 Greater Expectations

I cheered when I saw Teddy's name I was soo happy, but I thought Teddy was a 7th year? Also the last line about him being afriad of heights was the perfect way to end it great job!

Author's Response:

Nope it said in the Epilogue that Teddy was saying good bye to Victoire which clearly shows he must have graduated the year before.

SLy 

Reviewer: Always_Obsessed
Date: 07/26/08 22:57
Chapter: Chapter 4 Of Badgers and Broomsticks

great chapter. I liked the conversation at the end about the brooms it sounded so real with all the terminology excellent job.

Author's Response:

That wasn't an entirely throw away conversation...but you didn't hear that from me. ;)

SLy 

Reviewer: Always_Obsessed
Date: 07/26/08 22:37
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

omg i loved how you portrayed Neville he was adorable i really liked him and I love Albus. This chapter made me laugh and cry it was soo good. I almost cheered when Albus and Rose were sorted to Hufflepuff.

Author's Response:

Yeah I love writing Neville...he's a hoot. Glad you like Al...definately one of my best characters to write so far! And Hufflepuff is going to have it's year!

SLy 

Reviewer: Always_Obsessed
Date: 07/26/08 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 2 Boats, Brothers and other Decisions

the second to last paragraph where you describe their first sight of the castle almost made me cry because it was so beautiful and descriptive. Excellent job you're an amazing writer.

Author's Response:

Thank my beta's for kicking it around and making it more concise! Glad you enjoyed it so much.

SLy 

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 07/25/08 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

wow! deffinately sue proof! that and the previous chapters are amazing! i love it! it is a favourite too =D

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it...please tell your friends my reader ship has gone way down here recently.

SLy 

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 07/25/08 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

Thank you for the update, and I look forward to reading more. I like how Albus was given a chance demonstrate his wand's power. Please update when you can. Thanks again.

Author's Response:

I hope to!

SLy 

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 07/25/08 10:13
Chapter: Chapter 5 Greater Expectations

LOVE IT!

Author's Response:

THANKS!

SLy 

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 07/25/08 2:40
Chapter: Chapter 5 Greater Expectations

Thank you so much for the update, and I was very surprised at Professor Flint's attitude in the classroom. He seemed to care about his students, and to disregard family ties. I really am looking forward to the next update. One last note, it is awesome how the story takes a different turn from Albus and Scorpius being sorted into Hufflepuff rathe than Gryffindor or Slytherin.

Author's Response:

Yes I am so glad that twisted plot bunny hippity hopped into my life!  Professor Flint intrigues me as well...he's not a pure blood elitest but rather a Gregor Medelesque geneticist.

Glad you are enjoying this!

SLy 

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/24/08 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 5 Greater Expectations

what took you so long to write this chapter?!

well u did,so now im happy!

well these things do skip a generation sometimes!

how the hell does flint know abt lili being a potions maven??

Surihya

Author's Response:

Professor Arcturous Flint is a Flint...not related to Marcus Flint in the HP books...well maybe he is but I prefer not to think so...

And I have updated two chapters this month so I am doing better I hope :)

SLy 

Reviewer: seeker15
Date: 07/23/08 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 4 Of Badgers and Broomsticks

another great chapter.....as usual!!! i LOVED the whole thing about Cedric!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, just trying to get a sense of Hufflepuff history. I don't think the 'puffs would get over Ced's death without some sort of memorial. And what Dumbledore said about him was so profound it made for some good advice. Anyway glad you like it.

SLy 

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 07/22/08 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 4 Of Badgers and Broomsticks

you might not live in a scottish castle but believe me, you are a lovely author!!! great job =)

Author's Response:

Oh my....what to say to that?

SLy 

Reviewer: fishstep
Date: 07/21/08 19:25
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

Good beginning. I like these kids and want to read more about them. What more can an author ask? :-)

Author's Response:

I'm glad people are caring...that gets hairy sometimes but better than the alternative! LOL! Keep reading and enjoying!

SLy

 

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