Reviewer: Gaudy Femme
Date: 10/19/08 22:52
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

by far the best fanfic i've read. great ingenuity, could work on spelling. waiting patiently for another great chapter...

Author's Response:

Not to doubt you but a LOT of really anal people have gone over that chapter with a fine tooth comb, I think what you are seeing as misspellings are british spellings...trust me I have had enough rows about this...UK spellings are different sometimes by one letter and that causes it to look misspelled. This website is pretty particular about that...well depending on the beta, I have had one beta turn me down for not having british spellings then have yet another turn me down again for having misspellings after I changed them to British! The secret to navigating this sites byzantine labyrinth of betas is to assign yourself one or two that you trust. Leave a note in your chapter notes specifying who you want to beta...sometimes if that beta goes bye bye for a while that backfires but for the most part it helps. Thanks for your concern though! Keep reading I have one in the queu right now!

SLy

Reviewer: mathgirl365
Date: 10/12/08 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 2 Boats, Brothers and other Decisions

i love it and scorpius ROX

Author's Response:

ooooookay! Glad you like.

SLy

Reviewer: ilovesnape
Date: 10/06/08 7:15
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

I love this story! It just gets better every chapter. Can't wait for the next one x

Author's Response:

Thanks, as soon as the queue opens back up it's ready to go!

 SLy

Reviewer: CDJCG
Date: 09/29/08 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

I love this story so much! I was at first disapointed by the sorting but now im pleasently surprised =] Keep writing!

Author's Response:

Chapter 9 is ready just  waiting on the queue to reopen! Keep reading!

SLy

Reviewer: loverofallemos
Date: 09/28/08 10:05
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

Good story so far. Write more.

Author's Response:

Will do!

SLy

Reviewer: inkwell94
Date: 09/26/08 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

what?! no next chapter?! noooooooo!

Author's Response:

For someone who thought me sorting the trio into Hufflepuff was a boneheaded move, you seem to be pretty invested in their further adventures LOL! hmmmmmmmm.

SLy

Reviewer: inkwell94
Date: 09/26/08 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

i think they woulve fit better in Gryffindor. or maybe ravenclaw if you want to be risky. but i dont think hufflepuff fits....no offense of course, i absolutely love this story so far. :D great job

Reviewer: Suika07
Date: 09/26/08 9:08
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

oh my goodness, i am SO GLAD that i found this fic, seeing as how i don't usually roam in the post-hogwarts section. i simply LOVE what you are doing with these characters and this story. I just stayed up through the night to read what is here thus far, and i LOVE IT!!!! it really is amazing. definitally the best next-generation fic i have ever read by far. incredibly, to be honest. Your writing flows very honestly, it is so wonderfully written, both description and dialogue, yet it's also has that same rhythm that the original books held, to be honest. amazing. I really love what you are doing with each and every one of these characters. I like that they are very realistically their own persons. So often the children are generically written as pure characture combinations of the parents, yet you definitally have not done that, each one has their own identity, completely independent and realistic. I love the dynamics you have set up for these characters, their interactions, everything. I love the trio, completely. I also love how you have written Teddy--he completely rocks. Your original characters, Gas and Cormac, I am really fond of as well. I like the Leprechaun allusions going on with Cormac, that very creative and i can't wait to see if more comes of that. You also have a knack for humor in this fic, which I am getting a kick out of. There were a couple of times I laughed out loud and my roommate looked over at me very confused. lol. The way you are tying in Harry's past with Albus' present is woven very well too, in a very real feeling way. I liked that allusion to moody's eye, too, when they entered the Office. (if I'm correct in thinking that's what it was.) And, also, I am SO glad about that little Snape's portrait bit. lovely, and I was happy to see him included :) overall, i love the story so much, and I cannot wait to see where you are going to take it next. It looks like it promises to be a truly great one! I can't wait! so, now that i have written a novel of my own as a review, I suppose that's all to say for now. thanks for putting up with my raving, and i can't wait to read more! fantastic job
-Suika

Author's Response:

Thankyou for the review. I Love lengthy reviews, they mean I hit a nerve one way or another LOL! I try to acheive a seamless blending of styles with JK's so the fact you noticed the effort makes me smile. I wanted to actually create a story, not move around characters that belong to someone else. I tried to create a universe for them to move in that was as facinating as the one JK left us. I hope I continue to bring enjoyment to your life

SLy 

Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 09/26/08 6:53
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

Ha! Good to see Snape at a loss for words.
Good chapter in an excellent story. Keep up!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! I've always thought that Harry naming a son for him would blow his mind LOL!

SLy

 

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 09/25/08 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

Outstanding!!! Found your fic today and will be eagerly watching for updates. Thanks for sharing your work!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! I am working on an update!

SLy

 

 

 

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 09/25/08 12:07
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

aha i love it

dromeda is class.

great add
xxxx

MORE

Author's Response:

I thought it was time for Scorpius to meet the family LOL!

SLy

Reviewer: dedequeen
Date: 09/08/08 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

i love this write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Author's Response:

I am working on Chapter 8, can't get it out of the queue at the moment. I have two primary Mods, one is on vacation the other one just looked at it recently  and rejected it, so I have to finish the edits put it back into the queue, wait for a mod...then hope it passes.Oh well!

 

Stay with me!

SLy

Reviewer: dedequeen
Date: 09/08/08 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 4 Of Badgers and Broomsticks

that last part bout scorpius gettin marreied to da broom was funny

Reviewer: dedequeen
Date: 09/07/08 19:01
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

dis is gettin interesting way to spice things up

Reviewer: dedequeen
Date: 09/07/08 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

this is really good

Author's Response:

THanks!

SLy

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 08/12/08 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

I just discovered this story again!  I made sure to add it to my favorites so I can get the updates.  I really like this story!  It is truly unique.  So many Albus/Rose/Scorpious stories have them either in Griffindor or Slytherin.  It's great to see them all in Hufflepuff.  And how ingenious to have Filch and Mrs. Norris as ghosts!  Great job!  Can't wait to read the next chapter.  I want to learn more about that wand.

Author's Response:

I've always been amazed that Filch and McGonnagall show up so often in fanfics about the next gen! How old are they? SHEESH! Glad you found me again...wish a lot of those reviewers from the first chapter would come back LOL! I dropped off quite a bit! Keep reading!

SLy

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 08/12/08 5:43
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

moreeee morreee

what talent does he have and how did he get it i wonder

Author's Response:

More on the way....and Nyahh naaaahh not gonna tell ya! Yet.

SLy 

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 08/11/08 20:31
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

I love your portrayal of all the characters, especially Rose,and I like that Albus isn't good at Quidditch.

Author's Response:

Glad you like my little Rose! Albus can't be good at QUidditch until he learns to fly LOL!

SLy 

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 08/11/08 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

Wonderful!!!
I loved it!!!
U are teriffic once again!!

Surihya

Author's Response:

Thanks!

SLy 

Reviewer: DivineQuill
Date: 08/11/08 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

I loved the conversation between Albus and Freya. There is no such thing as normal and if there was it would be deadly dull! Is Freya's last name a reference to the Egyptian cat goddess Bastet? I would also like to add that I am glad you are showcasing Hufflepuff house's noble qualities. Hufflepuff, has always been, in my opinion, the best house, because its founder was the only one that wasn't prejudiced in any way. You're doing a great job on this story so far! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Freya comes from the Norse goddess who had a chariot pulled by cats. Bast was indeed from the Egyptian goddess of cats. So that would be a yes! Good eye! I think I am enjoying the Trio's Hufflepuffesque character more than anything else. Now that I have written this story I just can't conceive of them anywhere else! I want to live in The Cellar now LOL!

SLy 

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