Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 11/27/11 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

I loved every single chapter of your story!! It was so so good. You have got to keep writing because you have a very strong talent. You are like me, you imagine Albus and Rose being sorted into Hufflepuff, I imagine them being in Ravenclaw because that is my House. My story is about them going into the past, but while reading your story, I've noticed yours is WAY more detailed than mine which is a good thing for you, but not for me. You are extremely creative. Keep posting new stories, I'll be waiting.

Reviewer: HufflepuffPride-X
Date: 06/28/11 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

Ahem... I have been trying to find the other chapters on that site ( fanfiction or something ) Well, the one you mentioned earlier on in the Review responses. I am such a fan of your work and I just need to know your userne for it so I can read more. I reeeeaaaaaalllllly love your work. I am besotted and obsessed with it all


Love ya! Rosalyn xxx

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/10/11 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 18 A Threefold Cord

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP GOING ON THIS, THIS IS MY FAVORITE SERIES!!!!!!!! PLEEAAASSEE KEEP GOING!!!! :D:D:D
ps: you really should write your own book!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Reviewer: just_love_reading
Date: 01/01/11 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 18 A Threefold Cord

this is really good
please write the next chapeter soon!!!
:D

Reviewer: Laurelyn
Date: 12/08/10 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 11 Flying Like A Dragon's After You

Your imagination knows no bounds. : ) Charlie has always been one of my personal favorites, and you made him delightfully evil! Kudos!

Reviewer: Laurelyn
Date: 12/08/10 21:53
Chapter: Chapter 10 Vampires, Roses, Wandwork...(Part Two)

Ooh, I love the sound of the Arboretum! I am a HUGE plant-lover; my apartment looks like a jungle. You have a great imagination! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Laurelyn
Date: 12/08/10 20:13
Chapter: Chapter 5 Greater Expectations

"Albus would swear on Dumbledore’s beard he had seen her eyes glow red before, but it could have been the morning light." = genius. :D

Make sure to watch your punctuation; there were several sentences that I found confusing. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Laurelyn
Date: 12/08/10 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

Well, you turned Hogwarts on its head, indeed! That was a nice twist! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Laurelyn
Date: 12/08/10 19:25
Chapter: Chapter 2 Boats, Brothers and other Decisions

Hurray for odd friendships!

Your dialogue is great, but try to work some on your descriptions and verb tenses. Every now and then I get a little confused.

Keep it up! I'm enjoying your story!

Reviewer: Laurelyn
Date: 12/08/10 19:17
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

You've got me interested! I'll have to read the rest of this when I have more time.

I like the way the kids turned a rocky start into hysterics. It seems like something 11-year-olds would do! Good job!

Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 11/01/10 10:55
Chapter: Chapter 18 A Threefold Cord

Please please please write more soon it's really good

Reviewer: OtterMoone
Date: 08/13/10 1:16
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

Hmm... Interesting... I'm adding it to my favorites so that I don't lose my place... I would have chosen Ravenclaw for the 3 of them over Hufflepuff, though :/ ...

Reviewer: thisgrangergirlrocks
Date: 03/20/10 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 18 A Threefold Cord

Hey it's been quite a while since you last updated & I wonder if you will finishing this story. I have felt a type of kinship with your writing from the beginning. It is entertaining and touching and not something with which a male writer is often gifted. I think this is one of most favorite stories and certainly one that encouraged me to read 'next generation' stories by others. None have reached the level of respect I have for your gift of expression. I hope you will finish this tale, but if not, I hope you will continue to seek some type of creative pursuit as you are clearly talented in the written word.

Author's Response:

This story is finished in it's entirity at FanFiction.net I got tired of dealing with the byzantine modding on this site, I don't have the time nor the energy. I was able to post several chapters in a row then the two mods I was working with got run off and I could not find a new one...just rejection by a self important mod who felt she needed to censor my words to my readers twice because I was too negative towards this website. On Fanfiction I not only have Albus and YptB posted in it's entirely I also have eleven chapters of the sequel and nearly thirty others and that number is growing. Thankyou for your interest but I just can't beat my head against this wall anymore I don't have it in me.

SLy

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/08/09 18:43
Chapter: Chapter 18 A Threefold Cord

Yay, I lvoe reading about Quidditch :-) Loved it!

Reviewer: Lily Cambers
Date: 09/07/09 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 17 Simmering Rivalry

ohhh please right more!!!!!! Keep Up the good work!!!!

Reviewer: Heir_of_Slytherin
Date: 08/16/09 1:57
Chapter: Chapter 17 Simmering Rivalry

Just wanna say I really hope you carry on with this story until its end! I'm really enjoying your characterisation and writing style, and your plot's not too intense or slow; just the right speed ;)
Well done!

Author's Response:

I appreciate your enthusiasm, I am putting the eighteenth chapter in the queue now. I hope it will make it back out soon for your sake.

Thanks!

SLy

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/09/09 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 17 Simmering Rivalry

Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry will never be fully prepared to deal with Malfoys, Potter and Weaslys ever again!!! LOL Great chapter :-)

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying this!

SLy

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/09/09 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 16 The Badger and the Snake

Hahaha, Excellent Quidditch commentary. Very amusing :-)

Author's Response:

Yeah it cracked me up and I wrote it!

SLy

Reviewer: potterstar
Date: 08/07/09 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

i'm basically screaming! fanfic stories i have read have putten Al and Scorpius in other houses, but THE ROSE WEASLEY in HUFFLEPUFF!!! nicely played.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it.

I mean...why not? LOL!

SLy

Reviewer: LoopyLoonyLuna
Date: 08/05/09 22:51
Chapter: Chapter 17 Simmering Rivalry

I love this story.. But I don't understand why the team was so mad at James.. They won right?

Author's Response:

The scoring for Quidditch is cumalatiive. That means that if James had not been messing around and showing off they could have put the entire season to bed in one game. Everyone else would have been playing catch up the rest of their games.

Thanks to Lilith forcing James to catch the Snitch early, they where only able to create a modest lead.

Make sense?

SLy

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