Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 06/05/08 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Heh, heh! Quite a cute little poem, but with a meaningful bit at the end. I like the 'But at the time Mischief was Managed' part. Hawhaw!

Thank you so much for bestowing this small piece of wonderfulness upon little undeserving me!
~Katie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed the poem! :)

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/30/08 20:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cool! I really like this one. I think you really caught their spirit! :)

Cyns

Author's Response: This is another story I had fun with. Now just to get my creative juices going for my current assignments!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 05/29/08 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

gud job i just luv da maraufers dey r ma fav

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 05/29/08 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like it. There were a few rhythm issues. I did like the great use of vocabulary you used: "contrite", "rapport", "exploits", "bourgeosie".

My favourite part has to be:
"The Marauder’s Map is their legacy,
To mischief makers from the bourgeoisie."

It had a very fresh and innovative feel to it. (As you might have noticed, I'm going through my "words must be chosen with presicion to do exactly what you want them to do" phase. I am currently reading On Writing Well.)

Smiles,
Luna

Author's Response: I have to admit that the Thesaurus and rhyming dictionary are my friends...and that rhythm is one of the parts of poetry I need the most work with...I constantly struggle with it, but I still enjoy writing. Glad you enjoyed some of my word choices. I have to admit that when I had the chance to use bourgeoisie, I had to...as this was written not too long after a trip to Rome and that was my favorite museum there!

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