Well done. I really liked your take on another Wizarding society, and there was a poignancy to Harry's voice that I really felt.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you like it. Bronte really did surprise me a lot in this story.
Oh, wow, this was so very good. I love your characterization and the wording; it was so brilliant. I also love the fact that all of us reader's know it's Harry yet she still has no utter clue.
Very good job,
Author's Response: And there is a lesson in this: if you don't stop and pay attention, you will miss what's right in front of her.
I like this fic. I'm sure that after losing so much Harry wouldn't feel like celebrating but (as he tells Bronte) he will for those who want to and can't.
I like the contrast, Bronte has not suffered enough to celebrate, and Harry has suffered too much to really be able to enjoy the celebrations.
Author's Response: Well, you see, Harry didn't come to Salem to celebrate. He thought things would be quieter in a different country, but he was extremely wrong. But I'm really glad you liked the story.