PLEASE MAKE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!! PLEASE!!!???!!! IT'S VERY VERY GOODDDDDD!!!!!! PLEASE?!!?!!!??!!! THANKS WHENEVER YOU CAN GET IT UP HERE.
The one cirtism I have is that it isn't always clear who is talking. I was able to figur everything out, but sometimes it took some effort.
Other than that it was really good. I wonder what is so special about the cat. Hmmm... Can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll watch out for that. :) The cat isn't all that special, but pure grey kittens are actually very expensive, and considoring this is a magical cat (although it doesn't really have powers) it's just expensive. :p The cat isn't important to the story.
hey i read ur first story ages ago, but this one has that modern day twist to it that makes it more enjoyable. But why did u change? i thought the other one was still good???
Author's Response: Thanks! :D Well, I was ashamed to look at the other one, my writing was so sub-standard, and also this is for a challenge on the beta boards. Only, I've got to get three more chapters up to get points. :O
I loved it! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
Author's Response: :O :D **Huggles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!** Thanks, duck!!
It has great potential. A very interesting first chapter!!!
Bex
Author's Response: Thank you, my only and fantastic reviewer! :D