Reviews For A Deadly Secret
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 04/24/09 15:23
Chapter: Prologue

Oooooh Rachel! That's a spectacular beginning! I don't really see it happening in third year, because I think someone older would be more concerned about balancing everything, but the more I think about it, the more it makes sense. It would be a very difficult year for Hermione, so I guess you can just forget everything I've said from 'I don't' to 'everything'! It seems like a very good idea, but make sure to handle it carefully. I hope you update soon; I would love to read some more! {BeccA}

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 06/16/08 5:39
Chapter: Prologue

Rachey!! This is a most wonderful fic you've got here. I can't wait to see what you do with Draco and Hermione!! =] *huggles* Do update soon!

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 05/25/08 17:07
Chapter: Prologue

Hmmmm! I can't wait to see where this story goes! I've always sorta worried about Hermione that year. . . I could never ever handle that kind of stress with classes, and I'm three years older than her age now! I mean, all those classes, the thought she'd have to put into the time-turner, all the homework, trying not to let anybody know what she's doing. . . sheesh.

Anyway, I totally can not wait for an update!
~Katie

Reviewer: Love_is_4ever
Date: 05/24/08 15:42
Chapter: Prologue

Hiya Rachel!

This was a nice beginning. It didn't give much information and it was rather short, but it's a prologue after all. Hermione is in character, and I always like a good Draco.

Now, one nitpick:

“Watch it, Granger,” he spat as their shoulders brushed. Hermione glared at him and sighed deeply. It was her third year; she should be used to that name. She should just ignore it, but it still bugged her.

I think you got confused, because it doesn't make sense Hermione gets bugged that Malfoy calls her 'Granger'. That is her name after all. I'm pretty sure you meant 'Mudblood', right?

Keep up the good work!

~ Samarie

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 05/19/08 20:52
Chapter: Prologue

I think this is a wonderful beginning, but I'm not exactly a big fan of the idea of Hermione getting anorexia- I guess that I'm not a big fan of AU in general.

Otherwise, this is a great story!

Reviewer: fg_weasley
Date: 05/19/08 17:03
Chapter: Prologue

Rach! *tackles* I'm so proud of this kid. I can't wait to see more of it. Its such a brilliant idea. I know this is a really lame review, but I couldn't resist being first. annnd, I always try and leave my beta-ees a review. lol. love ya kid. Keep writing! :D xox nikki

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