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Reviews For Lost Intentions

Name: The Savant (Signed) · Date: 05/17/10 11:26 · For: Honour and Horror
Excellent characterization all around. Ah, Pettigrew, that--dare I say it?--rat. You captured the sniveling, spineless snit marvelously. One must wonder, though, why exactly he was sorted into Gryffindor in the first place, considering how craven he is.

Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 14:19 · For: Honour and Horror
good work on making wormtail a real person, he's not just some tool of the Dark Lords. keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you see it that way. ^_^

Name: DragonDi (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 16:52 · For: Lost and Found
I am enjoying your story very much. It's very well-written, and you're doing a fabulous job of getting into Pettigrew's head. Can't wait to see what happens next! (There is more, right?)

Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm really trying to justify his later actions that we see in the books. Yes, there will definitely be more--this story will trace all the way to his death before it's finished.

Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 14:54 · For: Betrayer
good job it's cool to see peters side in this all i mean he's a lying dirt bag but well done

Author's Response: Aw, a lying dirt bag? Because he didn't want to die at the hands of two of his friends {i.e. his defense in PoA} or because of something else? 'Dirt bag' is a bit harsh....

Name: ginnygirl16 (Signed) · Date: 05/15/08 17:45 · For: Betrayer
ooooooooo intense. Cant wait for next chappie!

Author's Response: Hah, intense. Awesome. ^^

Name: AEM (Signed) · Date: 05/15/08 16:19 · For: Betrayer
Wow this is good. Horrible choice though obviously, and it was so easy for him to completely ruin their lives.
Can't wait for the next one, Hurry!

Author's Response: *chuckles* The next chapter is waiting in my beta's inbox, so it's coming. I'm glad you like it.

Name: Winnyy (Signed) · Date: 05/15/08 15:30 · For: Betrayer

What an impossible choice.
This is beautiful.
Poor Peter. Poor James. Poor lily.

Author's Response: I hope you'll be back. It's not done. ^_^

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