Reviews For Lost Intentions
Reviewer: The Savant
Date: 05/17/10 11:26
Chapter: Honour and Horror

Excellent characterization all around. Ah, Pettigrew, that--dare I say it?--rat. You captured the sniveling, spineless snit marvelously. One must wonder, though, why exactly he was sorted into Gryffindor in the first place, considering how craven he is.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/09/08 14:19
Chapter: Honour and Horror

good work on making wormtail a real person, he's not just some tool of the Dark Lords. keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you see it that way. ^_^

Reviewer: DragonDi
Date: 06/02/08 16:52
Chapter: Lost and Found

I am enjoying your story very much. It's very well-written, and you're doing a fabulous job of getting into Pettigrew's head. Can't wait to see what happens next! (There is more, right?)

Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm really trying to justify his later actions that we see in the books. Yes, there will definitely be more--this story will trace all the way to his death before it's finished.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/02/08 14:54
Chapter: Betrayer

good job it's cool to see peters side in this all i mean he's a lying dirt bag but well done

Author's Response: Aw, a lying dirt bag? Because he didn't want to die at the hands of two of his friends {i.e. his defense in PoA} or because of something else? 'Dirt bag' is a bit harsh....

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/15/08 17:45
Chapter: Betrayer

ooooooooo intense. Cant wait for next chappie!

Author's Response: Hah, intense. Awesome. ^^

Reviewer: AEM
Date: 05/15/08 16:19
Chapter: Betrayer

Wow this is good. Horrible choice though obviously, and it was so easy for him to completely ruin their lives.
Can't wait for the next one, Hurry!

Author's Response: *chuckles* The next chapter is waiting in my beta's inbox, so it's coming. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/15/08 15:30
Chapter: Betrayer

Oh...

What an impossible choice.
This is beautiful.
Poor Peter. Poor James. Poor lily.

Author's Response: I hope you'll be back. It's not done. ^_^

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