What a great rendition of what it's like to lose a brother and how it affects everyone differently. Well done.
hey, cool story. I think your a rely great writer. do you beta read?
Author's Response: Thanks! Unfortunately, I don't beta read. In fact, I often need a beta-reader, because English is not my first language and I've got quite a few stories not approved because of grammar mistakes.
I enjoyed this fic. I think that it is plausable that it would take something like this to pull George out of his grief after Freds death. I was surprised that they stopped fighting so quickly, but they probably realised that it would not do any good.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing. Yes, I suppose that George needed something like that to shake him thorougly. And no, it's not that they realized that further fighting would do no good, it's just that sometimes people feel that they've gone too far and dread the consequences. Well, both George and Ron should have thought better!
awww, that was such a sweet chapter. It made me feel all warm inside. I loved the way that George and Ron's brotherly love got them to stop fighting. I think that you ended this story brilliantly. My favorite line was “No need of that, Harry,” George said calmly, smiling. “I am already here.” that was so sweet.
Author's Response: To tell you the truth, that was my favorite line, too. Thanks!
I thought I had sent a review before. After reading this chapter I can see one of my concerns that George turning dark and staying that way doesn't seem to be the case here. So many fan fictions have dealt with the mourning George but they have him going nuts. Here I think you are going in a different direction. I really like this one. I look forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me this. I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Yay, im the first reviewer (unless someone beet me to it in the last second)
oooh, this chapter is quite dark but its still really well written. I think that its really well thought out and I love the idea. I wonder what will happen next. I can already tell that this will be a great story. Its quite sad as Fred is dead an well Fred was one of my favorite charaters but I think that this story is really great as it shows the lives of them afterwards with not such a happy ending. I cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah, it couldn't have been such a happy ending, at least not in the beginning. Thanks for reviewing!