Reviews For Maybe Happiness?
Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/20/08 11:57
Chapter: Chapter 5

PLEASE update soon

Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/16/08 1:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

patience is virtue

Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/14/08 11:58
Chapter: Chapter 5

PLEASE update soon.

Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/13/08 0:49
Chapter: Chapter 5

I am still waiting anath very (im)patiently.

Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/11/08 8:38
Chapter: Chapter 5

please can u check why your chapter has not yet been approved?

Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/04/08 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 5

please update soon i am waiting

Author's Response: I already submitted the next chapter. Hopefully it will be approved. Thanks!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/29/08 6:57
Chapter: Chapter 5

i loved this chapter . It's so sad :(
Did the evil orphanage people hit Caine?
I can't believe that Julian (I really like that name) is blind. I think that you added that brilliantly to the story as it makes the story more exciting, though I still feel bad for Julian.
I thought it was very clever of you to add your name to the story. made me giggle. lol
I still LOVE your style of writing. This story is amazing!
Please update really really soon. I can't Wait till the next chapter!
-Raffles

Author's Response: Well, you'll have to wait and see. rnAs I told the previous reviewer, I warned that there will be damages for the baby, in The Finak Choice, remember? I feel bad for him, though.rnAnath is the name of an ancient war goddess. I've always loved it.rnMy nose keeps growing at amazing speed.*grin*

Reviewer: priti
Date: 05/28/08 2:15
Chapter: Chapter 5

u really wrote great chapters i cried when angela died.the after effects of newborn baby was really heartbreaking.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

Author's Response: Yeah, I felt bad for Angela and the baby, too, but such is life. After all, I warned that there will be damages for the newborn, in The Final Choice, didn't I? Thanks for reviewing, good to know that I moved you to tears.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/27/08 3:57
Chapter: Chapter 4

My suspicion has been proven! YOUR J.K ROWLING IN DISGUISE!!! aren't you?
this chapter was simply AMAZING!!!!! It was also really sad. *wipes away tear drop* I can't believe that Angela died. Through all these chapters I was hoping that she would live, and that everything would turn better. But that's just me and my naiveness. I think that the descriptions of Caines reactions to everything is written perfectly. You really hammered the kind of thing that little kids would do.“I don’t want you,” Caine said hoarsely. “I want Mummy and Daddy.” That line was written really great because that is probably what a kid would do. It made me feel so bad for Remus when he said it though. I think that the way you write and structure your sentences os really Brilliant. Isabelle, this is Remus Lupin. Remus – Isabelle Delacour.”That line just made me 'gasp'. Is she by any chance related to fleur? Another line that I felt was really powerful in this chapter was "Any minute now..." I think that really captures the pain that Angela was in at that moment. It was so sad when Caine seemed to understand what was going on. I could really picture the fear in that little kids eyes. That's another thing that I really like about your stories: You write them so well that I can picture everything perfectly.
Please update real soon. I LOVE this story
-Raffles

Author's Response: You caught me. Yes, I am J.K. Rowling. I thought I was so good at hiding it... I felt bad, when I kileed Angela, too, I was very fond of her. But don't feel too bad about Caine. He'll get better... eventually. I promise!

Reviewer: DragonDi
Date: 05/26/08 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 4

Gosh, this was a heartbreaking chapter! Just rip my heart out and stomp on it, why don't you? ;)
Another great job! I noticed a couple of grammar/spelling errors, but the story is great!

Author's Response: You'll need your heart for the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing. I must admit that English is not my first language, so yes, there are a few grammar/spelling errors, including - I'll bet on this - at least three that you have missed.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/24/08 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 3

awwww
that was sooooooo sweeet!!! I loved that chapter. I think that it is was one my favorite chapters in this whole site. It was both mysterious, sad and funny. I also congratulate you on creating another new character. Raymond is such a sweet and thoughtful man. I think that he would be a perfect father figure and I can imagine him with all of his children. Also, this chapter made me feel all warm inside. Births of baby's always make me feel fluffy but I just loved the time when Caine cries out "I like him" and "Remus he liked me too" That was sooo cute.
Also the ending "Maybe it could work" That was a great way to end the chapter! But I do have a question. Maybe you've mentioned something about this before and I was just too stupid to notice it but does Remus live in a Muggle apartment? Does he have a television. Because Caine watches 'cartoons' or is it one of a magical enhanced program for wizard kids? Anyway this is a really great story. YOU ROCK!!!
Well done and I cant wait for the next chapter. I love this story!

Author's Response: Hi again! Yes, Remus lives in a Muggle apartment - the one that Raymond and Sylvie had lived, when they had only one child and before moving to France. And the television is a Muggle one - after all, Remus' mother is a Muggle and I suppose that he must be acquainted with Muggle devices.rnI am personally flattered that you like my new character. I like Raymond too. He can be very nice and thoughtful, when he wants to. I adored writing the baby part.

Reviewer: priti
Date: 05/24/08 2:54
Chapter: Chapter 3

This is great story. I have read your other stories they were also great.please update soon

Author's Response: I will. Thanks for reviewing. It was nice to hear that you like all my stories.

Reviewer: DragonDi
Date: 05/21/08 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 2

Smart of Remus to head to the Longbottoms' first! The first chapter was good, and the second hasn't disappointed! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's good to know that you're still reading.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/21/08 4:35
Chapter: Chapter 2

hi there,
wow this was a really brilliant chapter. I just loved how it was both sad, mysterious and there was even some humor woven into it. I really love your style of writing and I think that this chapter shows your style a lot. I really love it. I think that the idea of this fan fiction is excellent and I love the story line. I also really like your Remus. He's so ... well remusy. lol. There are a lot of fan fictions who have got Remus all wrong but this Remus in this story is my favorite Remus. I also love Caine (I know, i've said that about a million times but still...) I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder what will happen in this story.
*smiles* GREAT! Job
-Raffles
(Oh yeah, thanks for mentioning me in chapter notes ^^.)

Author's Response: Well, thank you. Remus also thanks you (my Remus, not Jo's!)

Reviewer: pottergurl
Date: 05/19/08 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

hey great first chap. love it but one question what about harry is he in this story....well obviously not but surely he would be mentioned once afterall he is lily and james's kid or is he just non existant in this story which is not a problem at all or would make me hate this story on the contrary this is the frist ever non post hogwarts story to have caught my attention so congrats on that it was merely a curiosity love it great work
~Pottergurl

Author's Response: No, Harry does exist, it's just that he lives with his relatives and probably won't appear here at all. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/18/08 8:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooh, happy up-coming birthday and congratulations on another great first chapter! I really like his story and I cant wait for the next chapter. I think this is one of your best stories because I just love the mystery in it. Its really cool how it all fits with your other story 'the final choice'. I think that u have a real talent. Please update real soon!
-Raffles

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for both your liking of my story and your congratulations. You may want to check the site in another day or two - I've got a new Sirius/Angela story and the second chapter of I Am Here in the queue.rnrn

Reviewer: DragonDi
Date: 05/17/08 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Happy birthday--and good job on this chapter! You have a smooth style of writing that I like very much, and it lends itself very well to the dialogue.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review - and the congratulation. I'm glad you seem to be fond of my story. The next chapter will be up soon. Meanwhile, you can always go and check my other stories - some of them are related to this one.rnrn

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