Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/11/09 22:34
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

Draco as a Squib. This could be a fun story.

Author's Response: Yes, it was actually a story I adopted from someone on the beta boards. I just hope I can do it justice and live up to their expectations for it.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/11/09 21:48
Chapter: Prologue Muggles' Brew

Different

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 01/06/09 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 2 Easy Way Out?

ooo... I like. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, yes. I am so happy I got the oppurtunity to adopt this fic. And I'm very excited to see how it develops.

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 12/22/08 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 2 Easy Way Out?

Oooohhh!!! Please write more soon!! :)

Author's Response: Don't you worry! I don't think this plot bunny's original mommy would allow me to leave her baby out in the cold.

Reviewer: rayasunshine
Date: 08/16/08 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

Hey i'm lovin this idea, I actually saw tthis in the adoption center!
Plese update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, because chapter two is standing by, waiting for the queue to open again.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/31/08 18:50
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

This was a really great chapter. I love your characterization of Draco, which I can be very harsh on, so good job on that one. I also really liked the way that you had Draco be the bystander in the argument/yelling conversation. It seemed very like him to me, and at that point, the reader can start to suspect his decision to take the potion (even though we know this from the summary, but this is a good aspect to have in the fic). Very good foreshadowing.

I also really liked the description that you used, not too much, just the right amount. The only real nitpick I can find is that there were a couple of paragraphs that kind of threw me off because they changed topics quickly. Other than that, it was very good. Oh yeah, I also liked how you stated that Lucius was acting most un-Lucius-like, because he clearly is and that provided all the justification this really needed. He is a man of many troubles at the moment; it’s understandable.

Good work, again.

-Haylee

Author's Response: Yes, it was fun to write Lucius destessed. I do it in several stories. You should give it a try; it's fun!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/31/08 18:01
Chapter: Prologue Muggles' Brew

Wow, what a great prologue. It really sets the reader up for the story, and creates a very great sense of excitement and eagerness for the reader to continue.

I really like the characters you have created. Dejan is so eccentric and wild, but this makes for a great scene because without his madness while creating, the story would be a little flat here, but it’s not, so all is well!

Whereas Althea is rather calm compared to her Potion’s Master. She seems like she would be the perfect apprentice for him.

Great start and I can’t wait to read the rest and see how all this ties together with Draco.

-Haylee

Author's Response: I'm glad you like them. You never know, they may make a reappearence!

Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 07/29/08 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

This is SUCH a cool idea! I can't wait for it to develop. :)

Author's Response: Well, don't you worry! There will be plenty more.

Reviewer: singing_in_the_rain
Date: 07/20/08 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

It looks like it will be really good!! Keep writing please!

Author's Response: Don't worry. Draco's being a little stubborn with this topic (as you can imagine), but I'm still writing it whether he likes it or not!

Reviewer: SpoonForkSpork
Date: 07/09/08 21:46
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

No! Where's the rest of it???? Crap this is why i hate reading not-finished stories. It was really good so far though,

Author's Response: *groans little kid groan before apology* I'm sorry for not finishing the entire story within a month of posting it. Don't worry, though. This fic is far from abandoned, and I have no intention of letting such a wonderful idea go to waste.

Reviewer: Mirekano
Date: 07/04/08 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

I like your writing style. :D

However, Draco DID use the Unforgivable Curses; on Ollivander, I believe, witnessed by Harry. I'd think Harry would mention this at the trial. ^^

Author's Response: Yes, but remember, there hasn't been a trial yet. The Ministry might not know this, so Draco has a great oppurtunity to get away with all of it. Well...maybe not great.

Reviewer: feltonismine
Date: 07/03/08 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

This is getting to be good, I can't wait to see if/how Draco defies his parents. Also, the thing about Lucius and the after-effects of his imprisonment really got me thinking. I've never really thought about how badly he must have been affected by Azkaban. Great job!

Author's Response: You know, everybody seems to like Lucius' reaction. It's almost inspiring me to write a D/A about his release from Azkaban.

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 07/02/08 20:33
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

I know this is supposed to be a funny story, but those last few paragraphs make me want to cry.

Author's Response: Yeah, but I got this story as a plot bunny, and the creator wanted a sulky humor. And given the plot, this wasn't going to be a Dane Cook piece abyway. Don'y worry, though; it will get a lot funny in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 07/02/08 19:45
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

Wow. That was good--and serious. I've never really thought about how Lucius was affected by Azkaban, and how that in turn would affect Draco and Narcissa. The little shouting fete was fantastic too. Makes me feel sorry for Draco. Bravo, OliveOil_Med!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it so much. I once had a professor who was once a hardcore Vietnam protester, and he told us all about returning soldiers and PTSD, and that's sort of what inspired Lucius. Anyway, I'm happy you think I'm taking good care of your baby.

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/02/08 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

wow i m lovin dis story it looks very promising nits gettin even better update soon

Author's Response: Don't worry. I have no plans of letting this story die.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/01/08 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

i like this story, i like the fact that Draco is going against his parents.

Author's Response: Yes, Draco will be doing all kinds of things his pureblood parents wouldn't approve of.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/01/08 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 1 The People Who Look and Think Like You

This is getting good. Now if we could see Lucius and Narcissa explode? Of course Lucius will probably go back to Azkaban .

Author's Response: Well, as I say with all my stories, you will have to wait.

Reviewer: feltonismine
Date: 06/20/08 7:23
Chapter: Prologue Muggles' Brew

I like the beginning, and the summary sounds good, too... Wait, where's the rest of it? UPDATE SOON!!!! Can't wait!

Author's Response: Don't worry, the rest will be coming. This is a story that needs to be told!

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 06/11/08 12:39
Chapter: Prologue Muggles' Brew

This is great! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, I hope to have the next chapter up in about a week.

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 05/26/08 16:57
Chapter: Prologue Muggles' Brew

More, por favor! (Rhymes!) Your summary is SO interesting--I really want to see this story!

Author's Response: I'm still working on the first chapter. I just really want it to shine.

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