Reviews For The Midnight Watch
Reviewer: SkylerMalfoy
Date: 09/02/08 18:56
Chapter: Charlie

hey have you read the twilight saga??

Author's Response: No, I haven't, and I even lived in Phoenix for a few years! :D I've been told by friends that the Twilight vampires don't fly, they run fast, and can go out during the day, just don't unless it's cloudy/rainy, because they're shiny. Is that right? I'm always interested in different writers' vision of vampires.

Reviewer: SkylerMalfoy
Date: 09/02/08 18:42
Chapter: Nadia

That's such an awesome fic. Im partial to vampires though. Please update ASAP. I love it.

Skyler

Author's Response: A partiality to vampires is a wonderful quality! I heart you for that!

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 09/02/08 17:12
Chapter: Friends

I just read all 5 chapters in about 20 minutes. What a great story! I love the combination of wizards, vampires, and werewolves, and the way you have portrayed their separate societies. I'm impatient for Charlie and Nadia to get together already, but at the same time I'm worried about what they could do in the long term - I mean, Charlie's going to age and Nadia's...not. So will he ask her to bite him? Keep posting chapters, I need to know what happens!

Author's Response:

Wow, I thought I was a fast reader! *tips hat*

I want you to worry, so you'll keep reading, :D I'm almost finished with the next chapter, so you'll find out what happens...in part...soon!

 

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/25/08 22:21
Chapter: Gatherings

I looked up the dresses, and they are absolutely gorgeous. I wish there were more occasions to dress like tha faeries in Nene's pictures. I really liked this chapter, and I hope you update soon because I cannot wait to see what happens next, both with Charlie and the dragons.

Author's Response:

Halloween...Renaissance Faires...church...LOL

Thank you so much! The next chapter is "Friends" and has more than one romantic drama brewing! :)

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/25/08 20:54
Chapter: Discoveries

That's too funny! I'm so glad you're updating again. I havn't had time to read this story in so long, and it's been such a long while that I actually had to go back and review the last chapter. I'm sure I've mentioned it, but I am soooooooo glad this is no longer a oneshot!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for looking for the story! I went nuts for awhile, trying to figure out what was causing a HTTP error that wouldn't let me submit, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed that avoiding long sentences in Romanian fixed the problem!

The plot is going to thicken...kinda like blood, heh.

Reviewer: inspireme101
Date: 08/12/08 17:48
Chapter: Discoveries

Wow, your story is so wonderful! I truly enjoy the originality of it, I am new to other pairing and Charlie is one of my favorite charcters! Nadia sounds so beautiful, though I am a little confused about her age! If you could answer that would be superb! Charlie and Nadia make such a charming couple, if they start a relationship, I can't wait! Love your writing and can't wait for the next chapters!

Author's Response:

Yay! I get to say what I forgot.

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: inspireme101
Date: 08/12/08 17:48
Chapter: Discoveries

Wow, your story is so wonderful! I truly enjoy the originality of it, I am new to other pairing and Charlie is one of my favorite charcters! Nadia sounds so beautiful, though I am a little confused about her age! If you could answer that would be superb! Charlie and Nadia make such a charming couple, if they start a relationship, I can't wait! Love your writing and can't wait for the next chapters!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you found my story and that Charlie is one of your favorite characters! Nadia was a keeper, but a junior one relegated to using older model brooms unless she was on the night watch and no senior keepers were around. She didn't quite make it to 21, something that will come up in a few chapters.

Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 08/12/08 3:54
Chapter: Discoveries

Glad you're back! :-)
Interesting character, this Nadia, and interesting situation - I'm growing curious about the characters you hinted to but haven't introduced yet.
Pity about having to not use Romanian, though, I liked the odd sentences very much, they were very useful to convey Charlie's situation as 'Exchange Student' - or sort of. With only a couple of words it's not the same - but hey, if it's to get the story updated faster...

Author's Response: I'm thrilled to finally be back! I won't stop using Romanian phrases, I just won't use the same ones as in this chapter, or too many, and I'm definitely not going to give up mdashes, lol.

Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 07/21/08 10:32
Chapter: Nadia

Yes! Another cute Weasley romance to look forward to. Thanks! I don't usually like vampires very much, but I love your writing so... well, I'll get to like this Nadia in time... :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading even though you don't usually like vampires! Nadia doesn't have much in common with her fellow strigoi, which will become very apparent at the midwinter gathering!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 07/09/08 23:47
Chapter: Nadia

I like this story! I am very glad it became a chapter fic, although it was good as a one-shot, I was rather hoping it was going to continue. You are still writing For Bitter or Worse though, aren't you?

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't have the time to make this a chapter fic until after finishing George's story. The last chapter of For Bitter or for Worse should post soon, and I hope you love it! :)

Reviewer: Sly One
Date: 07/09/08 11:01
Chapter: Nadia

Yay! More Nadia and Charlie. I have to say not usually into romatic fics...until I read every chapter of "From Bitter or Worse" that is...but I am writing my own account of Charlie Weasely, so loving this take on him, as long as he doesnt turn into a red head Fabio that is LOL!

Keep em coming!

SLy 



Author's Response:

*Tries and fails to imagine Charlie in a Muggle commercial murmuring, "I can't believe it's not butter."*

:D

Charlie's described as "stocky" by Jo, which can give the idea of out of shape, so I wanted to make sure readers know Charlie's got broad shoulders and a muscular...build... To 'see' characters vividly is so important. (snickers)

Romance as a genre is so misunderstood! It just means the story's focus is on the complications of the heart more than it would be in, say, a Post Hogwarts friendship fic, heh, not that there isn't an intriguing plot that keeps you wondering what happens next.

Reviewer: Ancient
Date: 07/09/08 0:17
Chapter: Charlie

Some women are too dangerous to get close to, but we keep doing it anyway.

I've known a few vampires. I think there's a wolf in each of us. It's a beautiful world but never a safe one.

Author's Response: So why play it safe? I agree! (and so does Charlie :D)

Reviewer: patelnotpatil
Date: 07/08/08 22:29
Chapter: Charlie

*bursts out laughing*

My boyfriend's name is Alexandru. Excuse me while I get over the fact that he's the evil dad in the story.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
ok i'm done

ANYWAYS I loved it. (I actually really loved that I got my own message telling me to come read this :) it made me feel so special!) Nadia's so human even though she's technically not a human.

By the way, I was chit chatting with boy and he said that the liquor is actually spelled ţuică

Enjoyed this installment and can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

"Father" isn't biological, so it will be interesting to see if the Alexandru in the story bears any resemblance to your boyfriend! (You've seen him in the daylight, right? ^_~)

I look so much stuff up, I forget where I get things from, but I know in the region I was researching for the dragon research centre, they spelled it with an s. I double checked and found...

Ţuică (in Romanian /'c8;uj.kə/, sometimes spelled tuica, tzuika, tsuika, tsuica, or tzuica)

Readers are special, and if a writer has a long gap between updates but is too proud to go cap in hand to the people kind enough to review before, they deserve to cry in their tsuica or tuica or however they want to spell it, LOL.

Thank you for enjoying it! ^_^

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/04/08 12:08
Chapter: Charlie

I love it! I'm going to need to check your stories for more Charlie stories. Besides the twins, he's my favorite character to read about.

Author's Response: This is the only Charlie story I've written, but I hope to come back sometime in the not-too-distant future and continue the story...at least for a chapter or two. ;)

Reviewer: patelnotpatil
Date: 05/15/08 23:15
Chapter: Charlie

OMG! Reading all those phrases made me feel like I was at my boyfriend's house. (He's even from Transylvania...hahaha) Darn those Romanians and their beautiful language! Where did you learn Romanian out of curiosity?

But yay for ANOTHER amazing storyline coming out of the wonderful mind of Kerichi!

Imi place cartea asta! (I love this book :) in Romanian. I asked le boyfriend)

Author's Response:

Yay for you having a cool Romanian boyfriend! I hope he appreciates how lucky he is to have you. ;)

I googled phrases, then used an online translator. One of my readers has a Romanian husband who suggested a 'more elegant' way to say "I hurt no one" so I immediately used it!

Hmmm....when I get the time to return to Romania, I hope you'll still have the boyfriend so I can ask for a couple of translations. (He's not the prankster type, is he? :D)

Reviewer: Magic Muffin
Date: 05/12/08 19:36
Chapter: Charlie

Personaly, I don't care if you get sued by JKR! Sell away! By the time she finds out, you'll be rich (with mostly my money)! Your brilliant with these kind of fics!

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! I'd rather write original stories and have other people write fan fictions with the characters. That would be veddy cool! :)

Reviewer: Sly One
Date: 05/12/08 10:17
Chapter: Charlie

No he's actually Professor Hemophilius, and he teaches...what else....Wizarding History LOL! He's got all sorts of safety protocols, and Phineus Nigellus' portrait watching his every move...I was looking for a non-wizard professor, and he was what I came up with! Charlie is a guest star, doing a favor for his nephew, who is afraid of flying! How he helps him overcome that fear is unique to Charlie! My beta's like my work, I sure hope the MMNF readers do as well! Good luck with your writing! I am a big fan!

 SLy



Author's Response:

I bet none of his safety protocols match the chip the covert govt agency put in Spike's head on Buffy, LOL. It would be fun to have a school with a vampire professor. Good luck braving the perilous queue!

Reviewer: kati6110
Date: 05/10/08 23:57
Chapter: Charlie

This is great! I always wonder about Charlie and it seems like he would like to live dangerously.

FYI, my Romanian hubby said a more elegant way to say "I hurt no one..." would be "Eu nu am ranit pe nimeni, Englez." Not that most people would know any different. :)

Author's Response:

Dragons...vampires...the man likes dangerous beauty of all kinds! :D

Tell your hubby thanks for telling me that! I was at the mercy of an online translator for everything that wasn't in a phrasebook, heh. I'll go back and tweak the chapter asap, because even if no one knows but us, that's reason enough! :) 

Reviewer: MandyMuggle
Date: 05/10/08 21:43
Chapter: Charlie

Is the boy on the cover Harry? :D

Very interesting. See, Charlie isn't gay; he likes girls... the dangerous ones, naturally.

Author's Response:

He's a boy with unruly hair like Harry. I don't know any girl who hasn't purchased a romance or two simply because the guy on the cover is her type! :D

If Charlie was gay, JK would've outed him with Dumbledore, LOL. He's passionate about dragons to the point it makes having a normal relationship almost impossible, but luckily Nadia isn't like most girls! :D

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 05/10/08 21:12
Chapter: Charlie

Great story...I've always wondered about Charlie...he's the least talked about of all the Weasley's

Author's Response: When I read through the quotes about Charlie in the books, I laughed at how many were variations on 'he's working with dragons in Romania'! :D He definitely came across as a 'dragons before everything' rugged adventurer type, but that just challenges writers to give him a woman who shares his passion...in many ways. ;)

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