Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/20/08 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 4 Tom's Back Room

Oh my goodness what a mean cliffie! I wish it wasn't so late at night, if it wasn't for the Olympics, I'm sure I'd have far more time to read your story. But for now, I desperately need sleep, and I'll just have to let my imagination wander as to who is standing on the other side of the door.

Author's Response: thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/19/08 21:34
Chapter: Chapter 3 Bringing Hope from the East to the West

I love it! This is the first time you've put any substantial dialogue in your story, and I must say, it's fabulous. I also love how incredibly descriptive your writing is. I can see everything in my head so clearly.

Author's Response: I really appreciate the review. I'm so glad that you liked the dialogue!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/19/08 7:57
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Leaky Bucket

I think I get it, it's because Tom Sr. isn't a wizard, so it's Tom Jr. who turns it into a wizarding establishment. I think that's a really good idea. I can't wait to read the rest of your story! I just have one small little nitpicky detail that I caught. At one point you say that Dumbledore slipped passed some people, when it really should be slipped past. Just thought I'd let you know, because your writing is so good, I just wanted to help make sure you have no little spelling errors!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for catching that mistake. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/06/08 23:06
Chapter: Chapter 1 Dark Times

I'm hooked! It's too bad I'm going on vacation in a days time, I won't be able to read all the chapters before I leave. But I promise, as soon as I return, I will read and review each one. Until then I must say, fabulous first chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the interest you have shown my story. I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: SeverusSempra
Date: 08/04/08 0:44
Chapter: Chapter 1 Dark Times

As before, this is very interesting, and I love the historical twists to it. This seems to be a time in the Wizarding past that doesn't get much attention in fan-fiction (in my limited experience thereof), and you do a great job creating the scenes and fleshing out the characters.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 07/09/08 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 1 Dark Times

Your story is engaging and the dailogs captivating. Great job!

Author's Response: I appreciate the review. I hope you continue to read on!

Reviewer: Striped Candycane
Date: 06/30/08 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 8 Professor Frederick

I'm really surprised you haven't received more reviews, because this story is nothing short of intriguing.

Even though I feel like this is just the beginning of the story, I'm already caught up with the plot, to the point of trying to anticipate what happens next! It has a great political twist, and a very unique, almost gritty feel. The canon characters are nicely portrayed, and the original characters interesting and well-fleshed out.

The Tom Riddle cameo was a great little anchoring point in a fic that is so unique we almost forget it is a piece of fanfiction. Will he play a part in the plot?

I also wanted to know: How long do you think this will be (supposing you plotted it out)? I was just wondering because I have the feeling this story is going to be very epic.

Author's Response: This story is going to be long. This is actually the first story in a series that I am writing. I have this story pretty much mapped out, which means way more intrigue in on the way. I even have the rudimentary beginnings and general plot idea for the second story, including its title.

Reviewer: Jahya
Date: 06/03/08 12:18
Chapter: Chapter 7 Misunderstandings

Damn. your story is very engaging, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thank you very much for the review. I plan on posting the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/16/08 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 4 Tom's Back Room

oh no! Who is there in the back room? submit soon. I really like this story, taking place in world war II.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the interest you have for my story. I hope that you enjoy the rest of it!

Reviewer: iceboy814
Date: 05/16/08 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 4 Tom's Back Room

this is a very good story with a great plot. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope you keep on reading because the plot will grow more intense and intricate.

Reviewer: SeverusSempra
Date: 05/12/08 0:31
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Leaky Bucket

Very interesting to see an intersection between the Wizarding world and the Muggle world during WWII, rather than just parallels. And your writing is highly evocative and calls up the scene so well. Great OC's, also.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. There will be more OC's in the story. Let me know what you think of them.

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