Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/11/09 15:06
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

how heartbreaking :( its beautiful though, i loved the idea :) very clever. you did a wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Historical fiction is my absolute favorite, to read and to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: renlopez15
Date: 08/21/09 22:52
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

This was so good! I love the civil war story!!

Author's Response: Thanks! The Civil War is my favorite.

Reviewer: briiannaaax95
Date: 11/13/08 14:25
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

umm sorry but i didtn like it

Author's Response: I'm sorry.

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 05/17/08 23:50
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

I really was a little wary when I read the synopsis of this fic, but I really think you pulled it off quite well. I never would have thought of putting the HP characters in another time period, and I think that shows a lot of creativeness and boldness on your part. First of all, I loved how you stayed true to the characters. Private Weasley definitely held true to Ron's personality. He's always loved Hermione and wanted to protect her at the same time. Oh, and I love how you made a reference to his ears turning red! :) As for "Potter," I think its great that you still called him "The Boy Who LIved," even though he lived through a battle instead of an attack from a dark wizard. But, most of all, I think you really captured Hermione's determinedness and bravery. Like a true Gryffindor, she didn't want to be left out of the battle. But, I definitely ached for both Ron and Hermione at the end of the story! It was definitely a very "Romeo and Juliet" type ending, but I think it was also necessary to the theme of the terribleness of war too. So, bravo to you! Its nice to read a story that takes a little bit of risk but still comes out on top. :)

Author's Response: Oohhh, thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! I'm so pleased to read a detailed review of why this story actually agreed with you. It gives me the push to keep writing. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one-shot, seeing as it takes a deliberate curve away from my usual Ron/Hermione stories. Hearing that I stayed true to the characters if a wipe of the brow for me, since that was definitely the hardest part about writing this story. I'm ecstatic that it went over so well!

Reviewer: gwynevere101
Date: 05/16/08 22:23
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

Oh, that was beautiful. It was a different take that was well written. I wonder what happens to Harry, though. Great Job!

Author's Response: You know, I never considered what happened to Harry. I don't think he would have let his best mate die though, so he was probably killed as well, either before or after. But that't just my take, if you want Harry to live, by all means, continue to believe so! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 05/16/08 11:13
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

OMG - This was such a descriptive story and well told. How sad though - heartbreaking, in fact.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: heronarry14
Date: 05/16/08 0:03
Chapter: Come Back Home to Me

oh gosh!! i'm sobbing so hard!!!! ahhhh!! it was a very good story! keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! You're my first reviewer, so you're automatically awesome! Sorry it made you cry so hard, but that means I did my job and did it well. Once again, thanks!

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