Wow. That is a very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it. :) Cyns
Very nice although it doesn't really seem like a dream. It seems like his whole life. Thank you.
Very nice! Poor Severus - I think you captured his pain well.
That was kind of heart-breaking. I did not read the summary before I read the poem, and I like that, even without reading the summary first, I was able to tell that the poem was about Severus. Good characterization!
I'm not sure if i really understand it but i liked it all the same!
That was really good poem.