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Name: hermionegm (Signed) · Date: 05/16/08 10:43 · For: The Boy Who Lived
the plot is good... hope you can continue with it. But there should be an improvement in the style of writing.

Author's Response: If you're going to make a comment like "there should be an improvement in the style of writing," it would be nice if you gave some explanation....


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