Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 06/05/08 19:55
Chapter: Diagon Alley

Hey, I'm really enjoying your story. I usually don't read AU stories, but I like it. I can only assume Peter is in Azkaban like he deserves. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Well, we'll just have to see if he's in Azkaban or not. ^_^ Glad you like it!

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93
Date: 06/05/08 5:32
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

i dont usually like AU fics but this one is really very good. Well written, good story-line, Nice Job!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment!

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 06/04/08 20:26
Chapter: Diagon Alley


Author's Response: *laughs*

Reviewer: evester
Date: 06/03/08 20:57
Chapter: Happy Birthday

Very good! I can't wait to read more of this! I loved how Sirius and Remus seem to have a big role in Harry's life, I've always felt so bad that Harry didn't know them growing up. Good luck with the rest!

Author's Response: Sirius more so than Remus because Remus has so many problems with his life, but I agree. After hearing about the Marauders and such, I've been wondering for a long time how it might be different if Harry knew them and got to grow up with them. ^_^

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 06/02/08 19:15
Chapter: Happy Birthday

Oh, wow! This is a very good AU, and it's very believable. I'm almost surprised that Sirius married a writer, though I suppose that if he did get married, he would choose someone who's job isn't some boring, predictable desk job.

Author's Response: *laughs* The story of how they got together will probably figure into here somewhere. Maybe it'll make more sense, then.

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 05/30/08 12:48
Chapter: Happy Birthday

Great job so far!  I really like this different viewpoint.  Keep up the great work!  ; )

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you keep reading. ^_^

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 05/28/08 14:30
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

this is a good one, it's funny to see harry with a real father around and sirus and lupin too. can't wait to see where you go with it

Author's Response: Stick around and see. ^_^

Reviewer: Cerberus_Omega1993
Date: 05/24/08 9:19
Chapter: Happy Birthday


Brenna is sweet :)

Well, another nice, serene chapter... I hope you update soon!!

And, by the way, I'm looking forwards at the beginning of the REAL action hahaha!!!

See you around ;)

Author's Response: *chuckles* Good to see you back.

Reviewer: pyrovita
Date: 05/22/08 16:30
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

Also, just curious, do you read Robert Jordan?

Author's Response: I did for a while. But his characters sort of flattened out, so I stopped.

Reviewer: pyrovita
Date: 05/22/08 16:28
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

more more more, so good. Are you JKR in disguise?

Author's Response: I hope not. XD

Reviewer: Cerberus_Omega1993
Date: 05/19/08 17:51
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived


I liked very much this chapter, and I hope this continues throughout the whole story...

See you around ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

Reviewer: The Potter boy
Date: 05/19/08 15:57
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived


Author's Response: You're welcome.

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 05/19/08 15:44
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

I'm interested to see how this continues. Keep Writing!!!!!

Author's Response: The second chapter's in the queue. Thanks!

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 05/19/08 8:01
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

What a conspicuous, yet intriging story. I can't wait to read more of it.

Author's Response: Why, thank you.

Reviewer: The Potter boy
Date: 05/19/08 6:02
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

well, market forces will dominate in the end, and the most liked, the good ones, will end up with more reviews and posts, so in the end the good ones come to the top and win the awards,but yeah i see your point, it does keep the standard nice and high. So that's good for me. BTW do you know anyone who would be my editor, beta-reader, i have a fanfic i really want to write, but I'm not great at keeping the actual language of it fluid, so if you know anyone who's willing, could you pass along their MNFF details? which category do you think i should put a slightly AU - mystery- romance fic?

Author's Response: My suggestion for finding a good beta is either looking at Perfect Imagination (, or getting an account on the beta forums of MNFF. We have an entire section of the forums devoted to beta readers and people looking for them, so you can find someone on there.rnrnAs for the category, it depends on what is most prevalent. If it's only slightly AU, just make AU a warning on the story, and decide whether it's more about the mystery or the romance. Your beta reader will be able to help you more because they'll be able to actually see the story. Good luck!

Reviewer: luinrina
Date: 05/19/08 2:18
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

Ohh… *sniff, dries tears*, I always wanted James and Lily to survive. That now at least James has, it’s going to be wonderful. I like to see more of your story that starts off great. Can’t wait to read what else you have. Bravo.

Author's Response: *chuckles* Thanks. It really seems to be a popular idea. ^_^

Reviewer: The Potter boy
Date: 05/18/08 0:29
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

haha, wish this site was a bit more like,, which does even have a queue, and isn't so strictly monitored....

Author's Response: I'm actually rather relieved that there's a standard and the stories have to be validated. Fanfiction can get really bad.

Reviewer: The Potter boy
Date: 05/17/08 23:47
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

this is a really good start, when's the rest coming along?

Author's Response: As soon as it can, with beta and validation delays. ^_^

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 05/17/08 21:22
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

Ohmygiddygodspajamas! Update quick!

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: That's a new one. *laughs*

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/17/08 17:19
Chapter: The Boy Who Lived

Having James live, this will definitely take the harry potter story into a different direction. Now he has to worry about losing only one parent.

Author's Response: I'm intending on keeping all of the original plot that will still work with James being alive, so we'll see just how much of a difference it makes.

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