Reviews For The Shoes
Reviewer: Aquamarine39
Date: 04/21/12 13:10
Chapter: The Shoes

That's depressing and adorable and all in all I really liked it!

Reviewer: majahei
Date: 06/23/08 18:12
Chapter: The Shoes

That's a great story, and you're a really good writer! I really enjoy that it isn't all sweet and over-fluffy but it is more realistic. Write more stories, pretty please! ;)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I try. :-) I actually have another Lily/James fic going write now. I haven't posted it yet, but it's coming! It should be up fairly soon, I'm thinking.

Reviewer: siriuslysirius92
Date: 05/17/08 9:28
Chapter: The Shoes

that so great, update!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/16/08 14:40
Chapter: The Shoes

This was pretty. I loved it great job! Keep writing cos you have a great talent right now! {Becca}

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 05/15/08 20:54
Chapter: The Shoes

nice job! my only thought is that Lily's change of heart seems very sudden. I like your writing style, esp. in the beginning when Lily won't let herself think about her mother's death so the reader doesn't know about it. (It reminded me vaguely of Faulkner...)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you mentioned that. I'll go back and take a look at it again.

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 05/15/08 4:13
Chapter: The Shoes

I liked this story. I actually love this story. The atmosphere and everything. It was great, and sad, but the fluff wasn't overdone and that is honestly a bit annyoing when that happens because it ruins the seriousness of the story. Keep writing! :P

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you don't think it's overly fluffy...I do try and avoid that. :)

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