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Reviewer: MagicDancer4
Date: 07/28/10 8:52
Chapter: Thoughts and Apologies

Is this story abandoned?? Because I was enjoying it!!!
please please please keep writing I need to know what happens!!!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you very much for your review. This story will not be updated in its present form, but I have NOT abandoned it, so don't worry! I am reworking the entire thing, and it will be re-posted in the beginning of the new year, in a completely new form. Many of the old features will be there still, but many things will be changed (no pun intended). The reason for this is that I wasn't happy with how it was turning out. Many people were confused by the storyline, and I want the story to be understandable. So I hope you'll forgive the wait, and continue reading in January. Cheers!

Reviewer: sorting_hat123
Date: 02/19/09 14:44
Chapter: Thoughts and Apologies

Please, please, please finish your story soon. I really like how it makes you think.

Reviewer: blueturtleboy
Date: 02/14/09 19:50
Chapter: Lifeless

hmm....voldemorts spirit has been contained...maybe inside harry himself that might explain why hes evil. argghhh i dont know please update soon i want to find out soon

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 08/30/08 12:29
Chapter: Thoughts and Apologies

I am very intrigued by the characterization of Harry in this story!

Author's Response: I am glad! I hope he continues to interest you. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: paperrose
Date: 08/30/08 10:47
Chapter: Thoughts and Apologies

Great chapter! The italics are still kind of confusing, but at the end of this chapter, it seemed like Harry was writing down his memoirs. Or like the italics is all part of a really long speech to a victim of his in the future. I'm very excited to see how this turns out! Oh! And I love how you're incorporating stuff from the 6th book. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love your reviews; they're always very constructive. And something you said in this one is dangerously close to being 100% correct. But I won't say what. I'm thinking you can probably guess though... Anyway, thanks again! The next chapter will hopefully be up sometime next week.

Reviewer: paperrose
Date: 08/30/08 10:47
Chapter: Thoughts and Apologies

Great chapter! The italics are still kind of confusing, but at the end of this chapter, it seemed like Harry was writing down his memoirs. Or like the italics is all part of a really long speech to a victim of his in the future. I'm very excited to see how this turns out! Oh! And I love how you're incorporating stuff from the 6th book. Update soon!

Reviewer: potter_pen_pal
Date: 06/24/08 14:35
Chapter: The Boy Who "Lived"

loved it. Are you making any more chapters?

Author's Response: Yes!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 06/03/08 1:03
Chapter: The Boy Who "Lived"

Wow... again, an awesome chapter. I'm really liking this fic. Harry's mad behaviour seems to be not only his own feelings, but maybe something of Voldemort? I dunno. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it. Yes, Harry's behaviour is a bit strange... Whether it is his own, though, or it is Voldemort's doing, you will, naturally, find out later. I love it, though, when people offer their own conclusions and views - it's great! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter
Date: 05/27/08 10:42
Chapter: Different

great update!
Ron reading HaH? OMG! never thought I would see that happening LOL

lets hope the boys' "talk" doesn't get out of hand but on the other hand, maybe a punch in the face would do Harry some good

Author's Response: Yes, I thought the Hogwarts, a History - part was kind of fun... Ron isn't exactly the person for large books, is he..? As for the boys' talk, that should be interesting, I think. I will update very soon, as the chapter has been finished for a long time. I'm thinking a couple of days. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: paperrose
Date: 05/27/08 6:27
Chapter: Different

Another great chapter! Who's POV (if anyone's) are the italized words in?

Author's Response: Ah, well, the POV of the voice in italics shall remain a mystery, for now. You should be able to figure it out after the next couple of chapters, though. Thanks for reviewing! Next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 05/17/08 12:02
Chapter: The Little Things

Ooh, this has the potential to be very interesting indeed. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it continues to intrigue you. Next chapter will be up in less than a week.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/15/08 18:01
Chapter: Lifeless

Somehow I missed the Polyjuice potion. Why did Harry kill Lupin? I know that question won't be answered yet, but I don't think I have ever read of story of Harry Potter being dark.

Author's Response: Yeah, you're just going to have to wait for answers..! You haven't read a dark Harry story before? Wow, you see, I love them, so I've read many! I hope you'll continue to read, though (or, rather, I hope I'll be able to keep you interested). Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/15/08 17:59
Chapter: The Little Things

In this chapter, I can definitely see the dark emotions bubbling in Harry, but what are the different point of views you mentioned in the end notes? This is getting to be a confusing story?

Author's Response: The different p.o.v.'s will come as we go along - you'll see in the following two chapters. I just wanted to mention it, so as to avoid extra confusion. But this chapter was, as you could see, from Harry's p.o.v.

Reviewer: paperrose
Date: 05/15/08 14:57
Chapter: The Little Things

I love this so far! It'll be really interesting to see how you play this out, and all the changes you made from the books: how Harry turned evil; why he did; Remus being alive, etc. One qualm I have though is I want to know more background to what is going on; because you have changed some of the plot, somethings little things can be confusing. This may all be explained later, and I'm rambling now, but all in all this is definitely a story for the favourites - and I have pretty high standards for that list!
Keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love long, constructive reviews! Don't worry though, plenty of explanations for changes, etc., will come. Chapters 7 & 8, especially, will be pretty thorough as to the reasons for Harry's change. I find fanfictions that have Harry going evil with no plausible cause rather weak, so mine won't be one of those, that I can promise you! I have finished chapters 1 through 7, so I will add them with about a week's margin, I can imagine.rnrnAgain, thank you so much for the constructive review - please continue to read! The next chapter will be up in about a week.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/14/08 19:35
Chapter: Lifeless

Harry Potter becomes evil? Is this some joke? I want to read the next chapter soon.

Author's Response: Haha, no, it's not a joke, I'm afraid... But don't worry, this is not one of those stories where Harry just randomly decides to go evil. The why's where's and when's will come as we go along. Thanks so much for reviewing - the next chapter will be up as soon as it's validated.

Reviewer: tommyriddle
Date: 05/14/08 18:32
Chapter: Lifeless

I love stories like this, dark Harry. Polyjuice was a great idea. I hope you continue writing..

Author's Response: Thanks! I liked the part with the Polyjuice too, and this is my favourite chapter so far. Originally, I hadn't planned for the Polyjuice-part, but then, as I was writing the chapter, it just came to me, and it seemed like a good idea - I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing, and the next chapter will be up as soon as it's validated. I've already finished chapters 1-7.

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