Reviews For On Broken Wings
Reviewer: Silver Selana Moon Potter
Date: 11/21/10 14:34
Chapter: Prologue

u should finish it . it was good but sad. :(

Reviewer: Ellstarr 25
Date: 12/12/09 23:07
Chapter: Prologue

Right from the very beginning you had captured me in your writing. I really felt it, the loss. It was quite heart wrenching. I was in the moment. Overall, beautifully written and well done on a lovely, believable beginning.
xx - El

Reviewer: forevrjaci_2008
Date: 11/13/08 7:54
Chapter: Prologue

This was a beautifully written, heart wrenching and touching first chapter. I do hope you continue this, because I see immense potential for your story. I absolutely adore Charlie and feel the character of Hermione is better suited with someone older, someone to appreciate her brilliance and challenge her. So I am thoroughly looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: MissFreddie_x
Date: 08/28/08 17:34
Chapter: Prologue

Oooh, wow, I like (:
That's actually amazing!
Can't wait to read more.
I always wanted to read about Charlie.
xxxx

Author's Response: I am working slowly but surely on chapter one (its in the revising stage.) Real life has become very hectic, but this story is not going to be dropped. Thank you for your review! I always wanted to read about Charlie too.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 07/07/08 20:12
Chapter: Prologue

This is a really good story! Adding to favorites... NOW!

Author's Response: I really appreciate it! ~ Fauna

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 06/23/08 22:50
Chapter: Prologue

wow

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: GinervaPotter213
Date: 06/06/08 11:18
Chapter: Prologue

I was reading your plot/story progression on the beta boards and I think that this is going to turn out to be a good story. I'm looking foreward to more chapters! :]

Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter one is in the works. :-) ~Fauna

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 05/15/08 17:55
Chapter: Prologue

Oh this looks like it's going to be really good! I'll be adding it to favorites so that I can keep an eye on it ;]. Good luck!
-Lucia

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on chapter one right now. :-) ~Fauna

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 05/09/08 20:41
Chapter: Prologue

Lovely start! I can't wait to read more - this is a promising story. Great imgaery in your poetry BTW.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) ~Fauna

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 05/07/08 16:01
Chapter: Prologue

that was really good and that really made me cry a little.

Author's Response: Good... err, I mean... :p Thank you! ~Fauna

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 05/03/08 23:35
Chapter: Prologue

Wonderful, Fauna, absolutely wonderful! Best prologue I've read in awhile, actually. You really showed the raw power of loss, which is quite a feat in itself. Grief is one of the hardest emotions to write without sounding cliche or repeating one's self over and over again, but you pulled it off flawlessly! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job again! -Ashley

Author's Response: Aww! Thanks, Ashley! Gosh... now I have a lot to live up to, don't I? :) ~Fauna

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 05/03/08 8:45
Chapter: Prologue

i just like started crying...and i loved it, so keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Not that I like making people cry... but I am glad I made it sad enough. I wanted the reader to feel Hermione's pain. Thanks for reviewing! ~Fauna

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/03/08 3:44
Chapter: Prologue

This is good!=]
I don't normally like Harry Era stories, but this one had me hooked!=]
Aw, I can't believe Ron died. =[

Author's Response: Yes... poor Ron. This isn't going to be easy for Hermione. I am glad you are hooked though. Chapter one is on the way!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 05/03/08 0:38
Chapter: Prologue

awww, there's definite potential here. Update soon.

Author's Response: Working on chapter one right now... thanks for reviewing. It means a lot to me. ~Fauna

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