Reviews For Ginny's Music
Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 08/01/08 20:22
Chapter: Ginny's Music

Wow! I thought that was brilliant! Great job! I only have one nitpick and that is you spelled "daffodils" wrong once. Other than that, wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thanks for pointing out the miss spelling I'll have to fix that!

Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 05/31/08 10:28
Chapter: Ginny's Music

Oh, it's so sweet! I absolutely adore the fact that love was a music that could be heard as well as felt. It really added something special.

Now for the words that popped out and added their own special something: "twilight," "creak," and "flutter."

My favourite part is the fourteenth stanza:
"She talked with him,
Laughed with him,
Like they used to.
And then he heard it."

This really is the 'feel-good' moment of the poem and a good one at that.

The poem is very lovely and captivating, and you managed to close it with a 'killer ending' that leaves the reader smiling.

Smiles,
Luna

Author's Response: Thankyou thankyou so much! So sorry I didn't respond earlier. I only just discovered I had reviews!

Reviewer: undesirable_number1
Date: 05/05/08 16:34
Chapter: Ginny's Music

First Potter poem!?! Wow, I would have guessed that you'd have written a few, since this one is BRILLIANT! I love the rhythm that your poem has. The message is super sweet, too. You masterfully captured father-daughter love. --And I'm in love with your penname! It's so bright and cheerful!

Author's Response: Prize to the first reviewer! Thanks so much!

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