Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/14/09 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 34- Visit to the Village

ahhh i love it ! it was utterly fantastic i really want the next chapter now i want to know how people are going to react to it all :)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'll get the next chapter out when I can. It's a very exciting one! You'll like it more than this one, I expect :)

Reviewer: Marauders_weasleygirl02
Date: 09/06/09 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

OMG this story is so fu**ing aweome (exuse my language) but it is. I really hope Lyra can open up to nott. Sorry I haven't reviewed in s while. Even though school just started my teachers are giving out bucket loads of homework. Anyway. Update as soon as you can okay! I can honestly say your story comes in # 20 on my favs list. (There really isn't a list. Its just in my head) anyway. I hope you do well first term. Update soon okay! And stay out of trouble! (Idk why I just said that.)

Author's Response: I get it. Schoolwork is tough. I had little to no free time for the past two weeks. Luckily the next chapter was submitted yesterday. I'm surprised my story is on your list, since it's a fanfic, but thanks! So, um...about the'll see what happens with Lyra and Nott soon. As in the next chapter and beyond :)  Hope you do well in school, too. I'll stay out of trouble. The worst thing I've ever done is sneak chocolate while at school when we're not supposed to have food. Seriously. Thanks for reviewing as usual!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/06/09 19:26
Chapter: Prologue

Uh, greta! I can't wait!
And I accept your justificaltion. (: It makes sence. Same with the Nott part... sorry. And this is not really a review, sorry. But I wanted to tell you how smart you are and that I was completly mistacken in my last review. *hangs head in shame* :P

Author's Response: No, no, that's okay! We've all been mistaken before, I'm sure. For example, there's a part in a future chapter where Lyra is trying to apparate in Hogwarts. Then I remembered that doesn't work, so I need to fix it. That's one of many mistakes I made. No big deal.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/06/09 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

): how slow is slow?
and I liked this chapter. I like how Lyra felt bad about being mean to Nott...
uh, i liked how the star was like, so bright to her. it had a nioce affect to it, don't yopu think???
ack. her punishment was like, the EXACT same thing as harrys was in HBP. snape even formed the same instuctions... like, what he said... i don't know, but it seemed a bit increative to me. sorry.
Oh and you said-well, Nott said:
. "Look where Peter Pettigrew ended up."
Well, he doesn't KNOW Sirius wasn't guilty, does he? So he would think Peter Pettigrew is innocent, so he wouldn't say that. he would have said Sirius Black....

Author's Response:

Well, I've actually been able to submit sooner than I had expected, but it also depends on how fast the mod gets to them. I know her punishment was practically the same as Harry's because I thought...I mean, there are only so many punishments, and just because Harry did that once didn't mean he got through all the cards. I figured other students would do that as well. To clarify your other comment, Nott does know that Sirius is innocent. Remember in the first chapter of HBP when Fudge told the Muggle Prime Minister that they realized he was innocent? I figured it would have been in the Daily Prophet, so everyone would know. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter and the parts listed. I don't think the wait for the next chapter will be too long because I submitted it yesterday.

Reviewer: emmeline6620
Date: 09/06/09 9:15
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

Amazing chapter! I feel so bad for Nott.

Author's Response: Thanks! I feel bad for him, too. Hopefully you won't feel so bad for him in the coming chapters.

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/06/09 8:38
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

yea ! : ) just what i've been waiting for i'm glad that you didn't make it mushy between them, i mean like them falling for each other and that because i really don't see Lyra doing that. I hope the updates are not too long but school comes first and i no what you mean about the work.

Author's Response: I've actually submitted the next chapter already, since it's a weekend, so I hope that won't take too long to get out. You're right about Lyra not wanting to fall for anyone, so she's being really resistant right now. It's not mushy...yet...but I think you may be surprised at what will happen. Hopefully that's a good thing :)

Reviewer: Marsha Johnsegn
Date: 09/05/09 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

Great chapter! Stick with the story? Definitley! Sorry to hear about your school work load, though.
I have to say, when I read Andromeda got detention my eyes kind of did that weird thing where they get really wide, lol.
I was a little confused at first by the dream, but as soon as she woke up I got it. I'm still a bit confused about what exactly it meant, though I probably shouldn't be... I'm great at missing obvious things...
I really like the way you write Nott, because I don't think we know enough about him in canon.
I have to say, I found Lyra's reaction to him quite amusing; very awakard and teenage.
Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to an update, so submit the next chapter as soon as you get the chance! Until next time; Cheers!

Author's Response:

Yeah, the last week was kind of crazy, but it's the weekend, so I had time to edit and submit the next chapter. Regarding the dream, you're actually not supposed to know what it means yet. It'll come into light bit by bit. I'm glad you like Nott and I agree about the canon thing. That's kind of why I chose him--he's not an OC but we don't know much about him, which means I can make up a lot. All I know from the books and JK is that he can see thestrals and his father is widowed. Oh, and he doesn't feel the need to join..."cliques," I Draco. You'll find out about all of these things!

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 09/05/09 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

Well, I guess after the other chapter where it seemed she couldn't stop thinking about him that maybe they would have a better conversation and find that they could "like" each other, LOL...but I realize that would be predicatable, and Lyra is not a predictable character usually *smiles*

Author's Response:

Haha, it's interesting that you said this. I get what you're saying. That part is coming soon, but first I figured they should get to know each other better. I don't know if Lyra has really realized she 'likes' him yet, as she is very, very confused... :)

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 09/05/09 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 33- Stars and Snakes

Hmm...this was not at all what I expected the scene between her and Nott to be like....LOL...I look forward to an update :) I do understand real life being busy, so I will wait patiently *twiddles thumbs*

Author's Response: There's more to come on this subject, so maybe it will turn out how you expect. Out of curiosity, what did you expect? I plan on submitting the next chapter today, but the wait could be a while depending on when the mod gets to it...well see. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/03/09 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

wow very unexpected but good, i cant wait for the Nott problem to come it is intriguing. I was hoping that Lyra would embrace the dark side more instead of trying to challenge the anger in another way but i may be wrong. Please update soon

Author's Response: Lyra's dark side hasn't faded entirely. You'll see more of Nott in the next chapter! Hopefully it will be out soon. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Lyra's dark side hasn't faded entirely. You'll see more of Nott in the next chapter! Hopefully it will be out soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LifeAtRandom
Date: 08/31/09 4:04
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

I gotta say, this is the best Bellatrix-daughter fic I've ever read. Honestly. I love how in the beginning she's just an invisible character, but as her secrets start to unravel she unhinges herself. And now we get to witness Angry!Lyra for part 3, which is awesome. Hopefully she grow up into a more healthy person by part 4. By the way, I like the Nott/Lyra pairing, it really seems to fit in the context of the story. Anyway, good luck finishing the fic, I can't wait to see it unfold!

Author's Response: Thank you! Lyra will continue to change throughout part three and into part four, so you will see a healthier side. Luckily the fic is finished and updates shouldn't take too after I revise and submit, you'll get to read the rest! Thanks again! Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: emmeline6620
Date: 08/27/09 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

Great chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Marsha Johnsegn
Date: 08/26/09 20:06
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

Awesome chapter!
Glad that Lyra found a new way to channel her anger- I wasn't expecting it. I'm still quite sure that we'll see her use the Cruciatus curse again, though... In a strange way I like it when she uses the curse though (I'm not crazy! Hear me out...) I think it really breaks out both sides of her. The good and the bad. Keep up the amazing work! I'm looking forward to seeing Nott again! And some Quidditch stuff too... I also really liked having Tonks in this chapter! Keep it up! Submit the next chapter soon! Until next time; Cheers!

Ps. I’ve noticed that since you made featured your number of reviews have gone WAY up! So, congratulations!

Author's Response: I love to write unexpected things...I'd also much rather write review responses than papers for school, which I'm doing now...but that's beside the point...anyway, I don't think you're crazy. I kind of like it when she uses the curse, too, though in real life I would be totally against it. Many reviewers are getting tired of it, which is understandable, but it's a part of her character that will go away for a while...but she will use it again in the future. You're right about the reviews. I have over 150 now, and just a few weeks ago I got my 100th. It probably took months just to get 50. :D

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/26/09 17:12
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

uh, the cormac part was grrreat! and i see trouble coming to romilda vain.....

Author's Response: Thanks! Even if he was minor, it was fun to write about him. You won't see any more from Romilda, though. No Crucios or anything.

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 08/26/09 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

I liked this chapter! I like that she is able to use Quidditch as her outlet for the rage and anger she's been trying to keep under control! I do look forward to next chapter to hearing more about Nott :) I think it was an interesting combination, and he didn't seem at all like one would expect a Slytherin to be (which isn't necessarily a bad thing!) :)

Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see Nott in the next chapter, which I submitted today. He's different than other Slytherins, just like Lyra is different than other Gryffindors, as you'll see soon.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/25/09 20:08
Chapter: Chapter 31- Nott in the Plan

uh, it's heating up!!!! *drummroll*

Author's Response: It certainly is!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/25/09 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 30- Identity Issues

ukay, i loooved neville saying that 'bout the candy wrapers..... and i was so glad she apologize. well, she should, and i knew she would, she is nice.... but still, kinda... *evil (at times)
and isn't it that if it's an odd number of people in a clase, there is a group of three? but it works....
uuuh, i like that lyra didn't curse him!!! *proud* and i like the gernal part... is she going to see tonks in hogsmede???

Author's Response: Yeah, she can be evil at times. As far as the odd number think, I think both work...I mean, in my French class, sometimes we work in groups of three with odd numbers and sometimes the teacher works with someone if the activity can only be done with two people. It just depends, and this chapter wouldn't have worked without Snape. To answer your question, she will see Tonks in Hogsmeade, coming up in a few chapters.

Reviewer: darkchocolatemntn
Date: 08/25/09 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 32- Brooms and Bludgers

yay! kinda boring chapter. it wasnt choppy, just nothing really exciting happened. fluff really. but still well written

Author's Response: Yeah, I get that it's kinda fluff...I thought the idea would carry over better but when I wrote it it didn't work like I thought it would. Once the next chapter is submitted, it may seem choppy since it's jumping around with different plots, but hopefully it works out. I think you'll like the next one more, as it has more excitement and less fluff.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/25/09 18:50
Chapter: Chapter 29- Dora's Diary

It happened to me all the time through school. As soon as I was with someone, they left me because I wasn't who they wanted. They used me to get the girl of their dreams in looks. It never lasted.
hmmm.... i think tonks seems more likle she would be rather popular, don't you think?
*sigh* i wish lyra was nicer to tonks after she found out. i think she would be 'reasonable' as she /you put it, but i still thinbk sh ewould... support her sister, don't you? and she knows, or will find out, ho wit is to live when everyone thinks she's dangerous... which she is, as much as remus, in my oppinion!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I do think Tonks is more the popular type. Here's my explanation for this. I picture her with a lot of girl friends, and even a lot of guy friends. I see her as someone who had several boyfriends and huge crushes and whatnot. Because of her Metamorphosing ability, I can easily see boys taking advantage of that, however. She can be popular but be in this situation at the same time, I think. This is just how I see her and how she works out in the fic.

Lyra thinks she's supporting Tonks by keeping her safe. She, as I said, doesn't want to see her hurt again, not just emotionally, but physically. Lyra has lost a lot in her life and doesn't want something bad to happen to her cousin/sister.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/25/09 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 28- Rage in the Robe Shop

-Find out what kind of relationship Bellatrix had with Narcissa and how things were like for the three sisters growing up

this is her last point on her list. but the how things were growing up, wasn't that kinda answered in the last chapter? well, of course there can be more....
and what i would like to have explained better, is why narcissa didn't take lyra in? you said she had a son, that was the reason..... but... i thnk that's a rather weak point. she was the one who got along with bellatrix, wasn't she? .... ect......
and, seesh! when will lyra stop doing that?????

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was answered in the last chapter, but like you said, there can be more. The main point is that Andromeda and Narcissa have completely different perspectives on their childhood/family, and Andromeda can only tell Lyra so much.

The thing with Narcissa gets a lot of people. In short, the reason is this: if Narcissa had taken her in, there wouldn't be a story! I mean, I could write one but it would be totally different, and I personally like the idea of the struggle between dark and light, which is kind of a theme, and something that wouldn't be present in a story where she was raised by the Malfoys. I also can't say much because it may give away too much about Narcissa's character. You'll see in the future.

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