I think that you handle Narcissa's character well. Her feelings for Draco are well done, but I can imagine her worrying more about Draco failing than about him being a Death Eater.
Deathly Hallows left me with the impression that Narcissa was a Death Eater, if not as active as Lucius so you might want to consider adding an AU warning.
I did enjoy this. The fic is good overall and your characterisation are excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I wrote Narcissa as I saw her in canon. I guess there can be more than one interpretation. I think that's one of the cool things about fanfic, to see other people's interpretations. =]
I like the relationship you create between Andromeda and Ted. Bella's reaction is good as well.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I think that Bellatrix is very in character. I can imagine her longing to become a death eater from the moment she heard about them.
However I think it more likely that Voldemort, knowing her familiies pureblood aliegaances would try to recruit her parents, rather than her hearing about it from her uncle.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!rnrnGood point about Bellatrix's parents. I love canon nit-picking!rnrnI guess I just wanted to make the point that the Death Eaters were very secretive at the time, so even her parents didn't know about them.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Good point about Bellatrix's parents. I love canon nit-picking! I guess I just wanted to make the point that the Death Eaters were very secretive at the time, so even her parents didn't know about them.
i want to know more as its really good the only thing it needs is about10 more chapters
Author's Response: Thank you! =]
WONDERFUL! You're story is validated and I'm the first to review. Excellect, just as good a story as I remember it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm excited for your feedback on Chapters 2 and 3!
