Reviews For Toujours Pur
Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/29/08 3:35
Chapter: Cissy

I think that you handle Narcissa's character well. Her feelings for Draco are well done, but I can imagine her worrying more about Draco failing than about him being a Death Eater.

Deathly Hallows left me with the impression that Narcissa was a Death Eater, if not as active as Lucius so you might want to consider adding an AU warning.

I did enjoy this. The fic is good overall and your characterisation are excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I wrote Narcissa as I saw her in canon. I guess there can be more than one interpretation. I think that's one of the cool things about fanfic, to see other people's interpretations. =]

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/29/08 3:27
Chapter: Dromeda

I like the relationship you create between Andromeda and Ted. Bella's reaction is good as well.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/29/08 3:19
Chapter: Bella

I think that Bellatrix is very in character. I can imagine her longing to become a death eater from the moment she heard about them.

However I think it more likely that Voldemort, knowing her familiies pureblood aliegaances would try to recruit her parents, rather than her hearing about it from her uncle.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!rnrnGood point about Bellatrix's parents. I love canon nit-picking!rnrnI guess I just wanted to make the point that the Death Eaters were very secretive at the time, so even her parents didn't know about them.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Good point about Bellatrix's parents. I love canon nit-picking! I guess I just wanted to make the point that the Death Eaters were very secretive at the time, so even her parents didn't know about them.

Reviewer: lilyluna
Date: 05/10/08 6:37
Chapter: Bella

i want to know more as its really good the only thing it needs is about10 more chapters

Author's Response: Thank you! =]

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 05/10/08 5:48
Chapter: Bella

WONDERFUL! You're story is validated and I'm the first to review. Excellect, just as good a story as I remember it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm excited for your feedback on Chapters 2 and 3!

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