Reviewer: nayin
Date: 10/14/11 11:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hahahahahaha poor
Dean.....forever h/g

Reviewer: Evangeline_DeMore
Date: 05/17/11 15:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 12/07/09 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. Very Sweet. This story really makes me feel bad for Dean... something that isn't easy, because my favorite pair is H/G. Very good.

Reviewer: NoMinistryIdiot
Date: 06/30/09 11:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

(moan) it made my heart ache, it was beautiful, perfect.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it ( :

Reviewer: amandafink
Date: 04/06/09 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

that. was. amazing. wow. thats all i can say.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 02/26/09 7:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

You go girl!!! This is amazing and yeah, i have been wanting to read the Ginny/Harry pairing from another perspective for a really long time.
I spotted a few punctuation and grammar errors but I tried not to pay attention to those!! Good job!!!!!

Author's Response: ( : Thank you very much. Sorry for the big delay on responding and even more sorry for the grammatical errors. I don't have a beta....Thanks again for the review. Check my profile out soon...There are some updates happening. Including more stories if your interested.

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 08/18/08 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved that! I was in search of happy H/G fluff... but I'm so glad I found that :D Good writing. Nitpick: There was a "their" that should've been "they're"

Author's Response: Yes....I seem to be getting lots of comments about my "there's, their's, they're." My only excuse is that it is very hard to edit your own stories because your brain automatically reads it the way it's supposed to be. Thanks very much for the review.

Reviewer: katiakatia
Date: 07/02/08 11:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

that is super super super good and the song is like perfect for it :)

Author's Response: ( : I love the song too. Thank you very much for the review. I hope you come read some of my other stories.

Reviewer: maggie_95
Date: 05/05/08 6:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

it is soo sweet.... poor dean

Author's Response: Thanks ( :

Reviewer: proudgryffindor
Date: 05/04/08 23:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

ok ok this was very original, and i loved it! to be honest with u i never even thought about this whole thing from dean's perspective, but i'm glad u did, cuz it turned into a wonderful one shot. hopefully u are gonna be writing some more stories cuz if they are harry/ginny i will read them not matter what!!! keep up the great work!! (oh and p.s. i already added this strory and u as an author to my favorites soo hopefully that is a little push in the right direction for u to write some more)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am writing lots more stories and I do have more posted on Sink Into Your Eyes but give me a couple more days and there will be more of my stories on this site. Thank you very much for making me a favourite of yours that so awesome to hear. It is absolutely a push and if I had logged in sooner I would definitely have responded sooner. But I'm here now so check my profile for the updates ( : Thanks again.

Reviewer: megan_grace1405
Date: 05/04/08 3:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

brilliant, i've wanted to read Harry and Ginny's relationship from another prospective for ages! good job

Author's Response: Thank you very much ( :

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/03/08 21:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

loved it. it was so cute! Awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it( :

Reviewer: iwasminerva
Date: 05/03/08 20:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very original way to tell a Ginny story - through Dean's point of view. It was very touching. It seemed like reading a passage from a journal he might have kept. I enjoyed it a lot.

On the constructive criticism side, you should master the differences between "there", "they're" and "their" because it messes up the flow of the story when you have to reread a sentence to decipher which one you really meant.

they're = they are
there = in that place
their = belonging to them.

For your readers, their enjoyment of the story depends on you getting the right one in there, because they're not interchangeable! :-)

Thanks for posting a good new fic. I admire your talent and courage.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review....constructive criticism and all ( : I swear I am working on the grammar side but I'm young yet so it will come eventually. Thank you again for the review. I know it took me forever to respond to this but I'm back and working and updates are coming. So please check my profile. Thanks again. I'm always grateful for reviews.

Reviewer: butterbeer_HaNgOvEr
Date: 05/03/08 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwwwwwww! i loved it! and now i feel bad for Dean. Great job!!
"What really hurts is seeing them better off without you." that is my favorite line
10/10!!!!

Author's Response: 10/10 Wow!!! thank you very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it ( :

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 05/03/08 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice. Really nice.

Keep up the good work.

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Check my profile for some updates and new stories ( :

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 05/03/08 16:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

simply beautiful.....

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. That's great to hear ( :

Reviewer: anaiss_potter
Date: 05/03/08 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

great story.
i felt bad for dean. :[[
but i loved it anyway!
good job.

Author's Response: Yeah so did I actually. Unrequited love is incredibly poignant and tragic. But it makes for a great storyline. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lucky_13_Girl
Date: 05/03/08 15:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

My thoughts about this are:
1.) Awesome
2.) Where can I find this song
3.) Overall great

Author's Response: 1) thank you 2) You tube? or a CD (Mark Wills) 3) Thank you again

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