Wow. Very Sweet. This story really makes me feel bad for Dean... something that isn't easy, because my favorite pair is H/G. Very good.
(moan) it made my heart ache, it was beautiful, perfect.
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that. was. amazing. wow. thats all i can say.
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You go girl!!! This is amazing and yeah, i have been wanting to read the Ginny/Harry pairing from another perspective for a really long time.
I spotted a few punctuation and grammar errors but I tried not to pay attention to those!! Good job!!!!!
Author's Response: ( : Thank you very much. Sorry for the big delay on responding and even more sorry for the grammatical errors. I don't have a beta....Thanks again for the review. Check my profile out soon...There are some updates happening. Including more stories if your interested.
I loved that! I was in search of happy H/G fluff... but I'm so glad I found that :D Good writing. Nitpick: There was a "their" that should've been "they're"
Author's Response: Yes....I seem to be getting lots of comments about my "there's, their's, they're." My only excuse is that it is very hard to edit your own stories because your brain automatically reads it the way it's supposed to be. Thanks very much for the review.
that is super super super good and the song is like perfect for it :)
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it is soo sweet.... poor dean
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ok ok this was very original, and i loved it! to be honest with u i never even thought about this whole thing from dean's perspective, but i'm glad u did, cuz it turned into a wonderful one shot. hopefully u are gonna be writing some more stories cuz if they are harry/ginny i will read them not matter what!!! keep up the great work!! (oh and p.s. i already added this strory and u as an author to my favorites soo hopefully that is a little push in the right direction for u to write some more)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am writing lots more stories and I do have more posted on Sink Into Your Eyes but give me a couple more days and there will be more of my stories on this site. Thank you very much for making me a favourite of yours that so awesome to hear. It is absolutely a push and if I had logged in sooner I would definitely have responded sooner. But I'm here now so check my profile for the updates ( : Thanks again.
brilliant, i've wanted to read Harry and Ginny's relationship from another prospective for ages! good job
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loved it. it was so cute! Awesome!
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Very original way to tell a Ginny story - through Dean's point of view. It was very touching. It seemed like reading a passage from a journal he might have kept. I enjoyed it a lot.
On the constructive criticism side, you should master the differences between "there", "they're" and "their" because it messes up the flow of the story when you have to reread a sentence to decipher which one you really meant.
they're = they are
there = in that place
their = belonging to them.
For your readers, their enjoyment of the story depends on you getting the right one in there, because they're not interchangeable! :-)
Thanks for posting a good new fic. I admire your talent and courage.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review....constructive criticism and all ( : I swear I am working on the grammar side but I'm young yet so it will come eventually. Thank you again for the review. I know it took me forever to respond to this but I'm back and working and updates are coming. So please check my profile. Thanks again. I'm always grateful for reviews.
awwwwwwwww! i loved it! and now i feel bad for Dean. Great job!!
"What really hurts is seeing them better off without you." that is my favorite line
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Nice. Really nice.
Keep up the good work.
~ Parchment and Quill
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i felt bad for dean. :[[
but i loved it anyway!
Author's Response: Yeah so did I actually. Unrequited love is incredibly poignant and tragic. But it makes for a great storyline. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
My thoughts about this are:
2.) Where can I find this song
3.) Overall great
Author's Response: 1) thank you 2) You tube? or a CD (Mark Wills) 3) Thank you again