Reviews For Destined Love
Reviewer: bookwormfairy
Date: 12/29/09 18:18
Chapter: Prologue

I really love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: you_know_who_m
Date: 04/07/09 8:23
Chapter: It Hurts Me More Than It Hurts You

Wow. Wow. Wow.

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 03/16/09 17:25
Chapter: It Hurts Me More Than It Hurts You
No joke. Seriously. No effing joke.
This was amazing!!
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to review, I only found out you updated today!
Oh, you wonderful, wonderful writer.
I adore you.
Poor George!

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 09/01/08 1:20
Chapter: In Too Deep

Wow! This, by far, is the best chapter you've written yet!
So many little details that caught my eye, like how Flower 'crossed her legs disdainfully' and 'Arthur's eyes flickered with suspicion'.
Bloody amazing.
What part of this do you not like, becuz I'm not seeing anything...?
Oh, and II noticed you spelled sweat wrong...somewhere. >.<
And the whole part where Ron is thinking/comparing Fluer and Hermione (and possibly Julietta, if I read into that right) was slightly heartbreaking. Poor boy.
Well! See you soon!

Author's Response: OMG, nxdeed, I am really sorry I took ages to respond! I honestly thought I had replied to you, but clearly not. Thank you so, so much for such a lovely review, I thought I was going to die when I read it. Can you die of happiness? And thanks for telling me about my spelling mistake, it took me a while but I eventually found it! I don't know how that escaped me *scowls at it*. Anyway, the point of all this rambling (yes, there is a point) is to say THANK YOU!

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 08/19/08 1:11
Chapter: Resistance

Sorry it took so long for me to read/review.
I really wasn't expecting that last bit.
Or the fact that apparently dark green is a 'usual' hair color. :D
But in all seriousness, this chapter was worth the wait. Yay for us!
See you soon!

Author's Response: It was really worth the wait? You are unbelievably nice, thanks for choosing to start reading my humble fic! (And thank you for reviewing!)

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 08/19/08 0:45
Chapter: Resistance

How did I miss this being updated?!?!
-rushes off to actually read the chapter-

Author's Response: That would be my fault: I tried to sneak this chapter in so you wouldn't notice how long I took to update! I guess it didn't work.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/27/08 12:30
Chapter: Resistance

Wow, those Weasley boys bicker alot don't they, it'd like being in my family. I really like how you've developed Ron's character here, he seems to be quite focussed on the task at hand and is trying to play peacemaker between his brothers. Perhaps it's because this time it's family, where as normally we see him arguing Slytherins. Oh and i still hate Percy. The last conversation between Arthur and Donald did confuse me a little, but i guess there'll be more light shed on that later. Oh and great idea having a potion that will disable the landturner, but something that was hinted at in the chapter makes me suspect that Juliet may have a reason for telling Ron how she gets into Hogwarts. I can't wait for another update, there's so much left hanging in the air.

Author's Response: I've just submitted another chapter, and if I'm lucky it will be okayed! Thank you so much for reviewing, it means so much to me. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/11/08 16:20
Chapter: Darkest Path

I really liked this chapter, you've shown their frustration at the lack of action very well. And I particularly liked Penelope's thoughts on Dumbledore's apparent prepairedness, nice to see somebody not blindly following. Also, Julietta was a little naive to think she would succeed so quickly, I'm sure the Weasley's have faced much more than what she is currently threatening. I'm looking forward to reading more about Ron, whether he's changed his position at all since we heard from him last, whether he's heard from Harry and Hermione, although he'd probably be better off without that at the moment. Hope you update again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again, and another lovely long comment! You're right about Julietta being naive, it's because she's grown up with someone telling her how inferior ordinary (a.k.a. non werewolf) people are.

Reviewer: life_lemons
Date: 06/11/08 13:07
Chapter: Darkest Path

that sounds really interesting. I wonder what she means by "partially corrupted." I can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hopefully you won't have to wait too long!

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 06/10/08 23:11
Chapter: Darkest Path

I thought it was neato how you wrote time certain things went on.
I know you wont like this next comment (and I wont either) but for some reason it feels to me that this is a filler chapter. I know far too well that it isn't and what not--but one can't help what they feel.
But I rather liked the ending of this chapter, keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry about the comment. It was constructive and that's what I want. I agree with you, this chapter was a bit 'filler-like'. I'll try and make the next chapter better, thanks for being so supportive!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 06/10/08 22:24
Chapter: Darkest Path

I liked this chapter! It might not have had much action, but you get a look into all the brother's thoughts and how Julietta was affecting them. I'm curious to see what she has up her sleeves though.

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of action, I'm just trying to show how everyone is reacting. And be VERY worried about what Julietta has planned!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/09/08 16:02
Chapter: Prologue

P.S. Forgot to mention that my favourite line was Bill saying that Ron would soon be auditioning for the role of moaning Myrtle's less cheerful boyfriend, very funny.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I find it very difficult to write humour, and I was worried everyone would find my attempts excruciating.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/09/08 15:58
Chapter: Forgetting and Remembering

I am quite intrigued by this story and am really enjoying it so far. I particularly like the glimpse into werewolf culture we're getting, hopefully we'll see more of that soon. I'm also very interested in the land turner, is it sort of like a universal port key? Perhaps the order can have a meeting to discuss any possible way out of the situation, maybe they could have somebody who knows about land turners and they may have an idea as to how to disable it and keep Julietta from escaping? Just a thought on a way to introduce more information on the land turner, I'm just so fascinated by it. Anyway, before i start waffling again, I'm not liking Harry or hermione at all here, they're being particularly hurtful. Oh, and you really showed Ron's feeling of being bombarded by people and questions and feelings and everything. Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a long review! And thanks also for the ideas, I've become pretty inspired from them - THANK YOU! Oh and, to warn you, I've already updated and I'm hoping the moderators will accept it. If it is accepted, then I won't have thanked you for reviewing on the chapter notes as I updated before you reviewed. Sorry for rambling, it's just so you don't think I'm ignoring you!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/31/08 2:11
Chapter: Prologue

For me, the best inspirations come with Sour Patch Kids. But a net could work...

Author's Response: A net had better work, I can't think of any other way! And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 05/30/08 12:17
Chapter: Forgetting and Remembering

I hope the exam haunting ends soon!
I noticed that you spelled Azkaban with an 'S' in the second to last (?) paragraph. But other than that I think that was your only mistake.
For some reason I really enjoyed Fenrir wanting to 'scar as many as he could'. Hm.
This whole thing is just so angsty and I love every word of it.
I hope the creative juices keep flowing!
See you soon;

Author's Response: The exam haunting had better end soon! rnWhoops, thanks for pointing that out. I will pay more attention to what I am writing. rnThanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/29/08 23:52
Chapter: Forgetting and Remembering

I could say something truly lame about how you need to call in the 'Exambusters' but I'm going to save you the torment of reading said lame post.
I liked this chapter because it delved deeper into the mental aspects of both Fenir and Ron. I really hope that you find inspiration at every turn in life.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! That was a really nice review. rn(I'm not so sure about finding inspiration... I'll probably try and catch it with a net - for some reason, it's avoiding me.)

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 05/17/08 17:56
Chapter: Meeting the Weasley Boys

Grr. I've already erased and re-written this thing twice before.
It is such a relief to take a break and read a good piece of fanfiction before going on and cleaning the house. Again.
This was an excellent chapter. Very cold and chilly. -is shivering- :)
I dunno really what else to write about it, so I shall see you next chapter!
Much adoration;

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving such kind reviews, they make me so happy!

Reviewer: life_lemons
Date: 05/17/08 10:53
Chapter: Meeting the Weasley Boys

Thank you for updating so much. This is a great story with a moving plot. I can't wai ttill the next chapter, but it doesn't see like ill have to wait long.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've just added the next chapter, so hopefully it will be okayed and you won't have had to wait too long!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/11/08 3:20
Chapter: Nocturnal Negotiations

Thank you for thanking me for reviewing (twice! XD) !=]

Oh gosh...
Wow, this story is really well structured and well laid out. My stories are all higgledly piggledly. XD

I feel really sorry for Ron. :( And Julietta... :(
It just shows that how you're brought up really has an impact on who you are.

Author's Response: THANK YOU - ANOTHER KIND REVIEW! Thank you, I tried my best to try and shape this story into something resembling an order.

Reviewer: nxdeed
Date: 05/10/08 21:30
Chapter: Nocturnal Negotiations

Wow. I just realized that your chapters never leave me cohorent enough to review properly.

Author's Response: Yay - another review (of sorts). Don't worry, I like improper reviews!

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