Such a wonderful tribute. Nice rhyming! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)rnrnAND AS A GENERAL NOTE TO EVERYONE, I HAVE TWO MORE IDEAS I'M WORKING ON FOR THIS POEM SERIES. :D
omg dis is da best i hav ever read u hav dun a great job it was sad n fun to read at da same time luved it
Author's Response: Thank you :)
omg...so beautiful..it made me cry. i think that i can surely say all harry potter fans will miss fred...i can personally say that i will miss him the most. i think he never should have died....
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I miss Fred terribly, and I'm sure I'm far from being the only one. T_T R.I.P. Fred.
GREAT TRIBUTE. RIP FREDIE. WE LOVE U.
Author's Response: *nodnod* Indeed.
This poem gave me shivers near the end. I like the simple rhyming although i think there's something off with -
Though that's was not what,
Fate had in store,
- shouldn't it be Though that was not what,....
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for catching that mistake! :D It's been fixed now.
This is a good tribute. I was sad when Fred died, so props for giving his memory a fanfic!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
aww....I love that poem
Author's Response: :D
*Almost Cries* This was so good! I was so heartbroken that after I read that part in DH, I threw the book at the wall and had a good cry. It took me three days to finish the last couple chapters because I was so mad at Jo that I refused to pick my book up from where it landed for two days. Anyways enough about me, let's talk about your poem ;].
Your style of writing and ryming is really cool. Like the way you ryme 'joy' and 'destroyed' it gives the poem a free verse type of feel. It's like they ryme but they don't. My favorite part is the last fvie lines. It ended the poem perfectly. This is definitely favorite material. Keep writing, you are wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :D The last five lines are the ones that survived from the original draft actually. I liked them so much, I was able to remember them 9 months later when I was rewriting the enitre thing. xD
aww... This is a great poem. I love that it's sad, but the mood picks up at the end, uplifting the reader. Very nice.
Author's Response: I had to make the end happy. It's a poem about Fred after all. ;)
fred is my fav character ever n ur peom is awesome gud job
Author's Response: Thank you very much.