Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 04/22/08 12:25
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Most Faithful Servant

This was brilliantly written, and you captured the emotions perfectly, but oh how terrifying! I kept praying for her to get away but I guess it was all too overpowering in the end. I wonder if every time she killed she imagined her father to be the victim? Anyway, another excellent fic.

Author's Response: Thanks so very much for your lovely comments! I'm glad that you liked Astra's character and her emotions, because I was a bit weary of this would even get validated or not because of how the ending turned out. I don't know, I was just a bit nervous. :) But I'm so glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: midnightlily
Date: 04/22/08 4:36
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Most Faithful Servant

Absolutely briliant, I wish I could write like you!!
very powerful and please keep writing more!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks so much! I really appreciate the great comment! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: fg_weasley
Date: 04/21/08 21:53
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Most Faithful Servant

AH! Its up! Funny how you just emailed me that you had submitted it, and now here it is. Yay! lol. I do so love this story, dear, as you already know. I'd love to do more for you, too. :] Congratulations on this, love! xox nikki

Author's Response: Nikki! *tackle hugs* Thanks so much again for doing this, dear. I really appreciated all of the lovely comments and everything, he he. ~Lindsey :)

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