Um... not the best you've written. The writing was great I just didn't like the story. Did that make any since?

I rather like this story a lot. The whole plot was in-character, if you can say that.

You just feel so bad for the both of them, and they can't make it work. They're driven insane by it. It's not too happy-making.

But, I have a question. What made you decide to make Draco so different in this fic? What drove him to this point?

I really loved it, a LOT!

Author's Response: I think there are only two ways for Draco's character to progress. One is for him to become stronger, beat his cowardly Slytherin side and stand taller. The other is going the opposite, perhaps trying to do those things but failing. In this scenario he truly has no courage and inner strength and once the pressure gets to him, he snaps. Can't deal. I wanted to show this vision of Draco, as the one in TMLWKY is obviously turning into the former.
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rnI get so tired of fluff sometimes, I just have to write something super-angsty to balance it out. I have a hard time doing in between stuff...
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rnThanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you found them to be in character. I was worried about that because I took those sides of them to the extemes, but if they were still IC, that's great! Thank you very much!