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Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 22:48 · For: Chapter 13
OH Fuck. What is Harry Potter doing at the dance?

Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 22:42 · For: Chapter 12
Aww she hurt Draco's feelings. =(

Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 22:24 · For: Chapter 11
OMG! Snape has a wife? Who'da thought? =P

Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 19:24 · For: Chapter 6
OMG that was so freaking funny! Pansy hates Draco and is in love with Harry? Good Lord =)

Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 18:51 · For: Chapter 3
This is very interesting so far, and I really like it! =)

Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 18:31 · For: Chapter 2
WOW! I didn't know that his mother could be so mean. =/

Author's Response: She's a Slytherin...

Name: tinkerbell69 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 18:10 · For: Chapter 1
Hmm...very interesting. This is different than the other stories I have read. It's a good different though. I like it alot. =)

Author's Response: "Good different" works for me!

Name: Nohope118 (Signed) · Date: 03/25/09 19:41 · For: Chapter 1
Ok so I am going to leave a very long review on this one because you definitely deserve it. =]
No, really.
I love it so far.
Just prepare for some criticism.

Yeah you didn’t step out of character with him one bit.
He’s arragont.
A horndog.
Has a bit of a soft side.
Sign me up.

Ehm..not so much.
I’m sorry I just never imagined her to be that..well..open with the whole “whoring around” thing.
I’m not sure how to put it exactly. Its just not like her at all.
Specially the whole harry and ron thing.
She was flirting with harry for crying out loud and acted like the fact that he and ron were fighting over who was going to sleep with her didn’t bother her ONE bit.
Show some backbone Hermione!
Yes I know, she’s been through a lot.
Seriously though, her whole character wouldn’t switch to pathetic mode that fast.

Story’s great.
I hate the ending of the 17th chapter for obvious reasons.
But other then that, right on.

Author's Response: Thanks for the long review! Hmmm. I intended was that Herms was obviously happy to see Harry, and that led to some playful banter... but not necessarily flirty. Just "It's been a while, I've missed you," kind of stuff. In my head, she totally reacts to Harry's invitation by going all serious and makiing her very frank (and not playful) comment that she didn't expect Harry to view her as just another cheap score like he obviously does with those other girls. And Harry snapped to right away, dropping the flirty stuff and telling her how much he doesn't, in fact, see her like that. Maybe I didn't describe the sudden chill well enough, or Harry's sudden realization that he'd been acting like a gross disgusting cad... but that was how the scene was supposed to play out.

Name: Nohope118 (Signed) · Date: 03/23/09 14:25 · For: Chapter 17
draco must die.
its as simple as that,

Author's Response: Hmph!

Name: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: 03/22/09 15:30 · For: Chapter 17
ok lol a lot. Oh my the irony... Good chapther by the way

Author's Response: :-)

Name: Cassandra Cullen (Signed) · Date: 03/22/09 13:08 · For: Chapter 17

Name: swimluver711 (Signed) · Date: 03/21/09 11:25 · For: Chapter 1
OMG! can't wait for the next chapter...

Name: Marie Granger (Signed) · Date: 03/20/09 21:01 · For: Chapter 16
this is a really good story. keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: ZomgShaylex (Signed) · Date: 03/08/09 20:19 · For: Chapter 16
I love this chapter and I can't wait for more!
So please please please update soon! :)

Author's Response: It'll come--I like to give people a chance to read it first...

Name: tomslovevishu (Signed) · Date: 03/08/09 7:09 · For: Chapter 16
cool!!! waiting...

Name: mymuggle (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 2:49 · For: Chapter 16
that is, "yay" for the new chapter... not so much yay for the state of draco... poor boy.
loved the gargoyle detail ^-^

Author's Response: He's got a ways to go yet...

Name: sam_1034_lily (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 15:13 · For: Chapter 16
loved it gargoyle was funny update soon

Name: acciomagic (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 14:39 · For: Chapter 16
I really enjoy your writing, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: mymuggle (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 2:33 · For: Chapter 15
I check this story (usually) once a day...
Can't wait!

Name: HarryPotter317 (Signed) · Date: 02/21/09 17:40 · For: Chapter 1
Awsome, awsome awsome!! I can't wait for the next chapter....update soon.....pretty pretty please :)

Author's Response: Will try!

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