Reviews For Bereft Brother
Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/06/09 22:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think that you did a wonderful job with this poem. Sorry it took me so long to review it! The feelings that George and Molly are feeling really come across strongly. :) Cyns

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :) I think this is one of my favorites I've written yet.

Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/08/08 12:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww this is so sweet and sad at the same time! I'm a twin myself, so I could really relate to this poem. My favorite lines were the last three. You did an amazing job! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the complements! Being a twin is a gift...and I admit I imagined how I would feel if I lost MY twin sister...and went from there. I really enjoyed writing was a challenge and fun to do!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 04/26/08 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow gud job

Author's Response: Thank you.

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