Nice job! I really enjoyed this poem. I thought the way you referred to the Marauders as "Stag," "Hound," "Rat," and "Wolf" was very cool. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying to portray the Maurauders without actually calling them by name. This was a bit different then most my poems...but I liked the result!
Wow! I think that you did a wonderful job with this poem. You truly caught the life of Sirius as it was portrayed in the books. :) Thanks for the enjoyment. Cyns
Author's Response: Thanks Sis! I didn't know if you'd seen this before or not. You know how much I like Sirius! :)