Reviewer: Shreeja
Date: 11/06/11 19:19
Chapter: The Memories Begin

this was brilliantly written. When Hermione dies, that was a little painful, I am used to reading her living usually, from whatever little dramione I have read. The pain came through well. Great work.

Reviewer: SmartOnes
Date: 08/09/11 15:12
Chapter: The Memories Begin

Maybe my review isn't big enough to munch on, but hopefully to at least take a bite out of! I loved this story. Usually I don't like angsty Dramoine stories, but this was wonderful! Keep on writing!

Reviewer: kallum-lili-x
Date: 02/02/09 16:12
Chapter: The Memories Begin

I thought it was beautiful, really full of emotion...I'm not a fantastic reviewer I know, but I really enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response:

Aw... Thank you! I love reading reviews, no matter what, so your review was a real treat! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, as I really enjoyed writing it... So thank you for your lovely review! *sends hugs and kisses and a Weasley sweater*

Reviewer: SlythindorGirl
Date: 08/03/08 16:50
Chapter: The Memories Begin

um i think it wasd ok for a 1 shot but would have been better as a longer story. and also it is almost as good as the one dramoine_forever wrote

Author's Response: Awww... I'm glad you liked it! What was the name of the one that dramione_forever wrote? I've never read it. Lately I haven't been a good little Dramione shipper... I've been really busy. I agree, a longer story would be interesting, but I kind of wrote it in a burst of random inspiration, so I never got around to writing that. Anyway, thanks for taking time to review my story!

Reviewer: sarah_hp
Date: 07/08/08 14:55
Chapter: The Memories Begin

really good

Author's Response: Awww... Only two words and you've basically made my day! I'd like to thank you for the review, tons and tons, and now I have to find the perfect present for you... Ooh, I know! I'll give you a key to Honeydukes. Pick up some chocolate for me, would ya? Thanks again!

Reviewer: snapefan2007
Date: 04/26/08 23:24
Chapter: The Memories Begin

that was great. I cried. you are a great writer.

Author's Response: Awww... Thanks! It means a lot to me that you thought that much of me. And thank you for the "great writer" comment, as it really made my day.

Reviewer: Brown-EyedAngel
Date: 04/26/08 22:03
Chapter: The Memories Begin

I really liked it. The only mistake I saw was, I believe in the first paragraph, and the seventh sentence.
"“Why? Why me?” he asked his grimy reflection. He was twenty and going Azkaban. " Isn't there supposed to be a to between going and Azkaban. Just thought I should let you know.

Author's Response:

Ooh! I hadn't noticed that! Thanks! It's really helpful when readers let you know what doesn't look right, because sometimes the careless writers (like myself) don't catch momentary lapses in grammar. I'll edit it right away! Thanks again!

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