Reviews For The Other Weasley
Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 10/04/14 21:40
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Well, just because this has been here for six years doesn't mean it doesn't deserve a review, because it does.

First, there is the prose quality, the turn of phrase - it is consistent in voice, it's clever, it works.

The repetition is particularly well done - "At least it's not the Weasleys" and he is hoist by his own petard - he told Scorpius to stay away from Rose, and stay away from Rose he had. Draco's blindness to his son's proclivities - to the very possibility that there could be anyone but Rose that Scorpius could possibly have any interest in, sexual or otherwise, is so emblamatic of a family which has always assumed it knows exactly how things do work, and should work, that they cannot see any possibility that things as they plan them might not work that one has to feel Draco and the rest of them have got exactly what they deserve...

It is also typical of Harry that he would deal with this relatively easily - he has always had to deal with things, whether he liked them or not, from life at the Dursley's to Voldemort's presence in his mind to the realization that he has to die to end it all. So to that degree you've kept them in character.

It's a little over the top. Malfoy is a little bit tooo Malfoy, and Harry is a little bit, perhaps, too Harry, and I doubt Draco would have felt faint quite that way. However, as a comedy, it works beautifully.

Brava!

Reviewer: Missus_Black_in_Hufflepuff
Date: 08/11/11 16:15
Chapter: The Other Weasley

It was okay...as you said, it was a last minute thing! But it could have used a LITTLE more story behind it....

Reviewer: hallows_vs_horcruxes
Date: 07/12/11 9:37
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Definitely not the pair I was expecting ;) Really good though. :P

Reviewer: RavenclawDiamond
Date: 06/24/11 18:17
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Nicely done :')

Reviewer: Stone Lily
Date: 01/27/10 20:44
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Haha. I really liked it. It was short and funny!

Reviewer: Roonil_Wazlib125
Date: 08/13/09 20:22
Chapter: The Other Weasley

annie, I swear that was too funny. I was laughing so hard when I heard the line: Draco's son was standing in the middle of Harry Potter's sitting room, snogging Hugo Weasley. I was laughing even harder when I read: "Potter," he choked out. "Potter, I'm feeling faint." Lol, you can really make people giggle.

Roonil_Wazlib125 aka Annmarie

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/21/09 22:42
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Hysterically funny. Laughed outloud for at least five minutes.

Reviewer: ZomgShaylex
Date: 04/27/09 23:56
Chapter: The Other Weasley

I get such a kick out of this story. It has a certain spark to it that makes it endearing. Not to mention I laugh for a good 10 minutes at Draco's reaction every time I read it. Love love love it!

Reviewer: The Lark Dord
Date: 04/21/09 3:22
Chapter: The Other Weasley

LMAO!!!!
That was so funny, you should take more homework breaks :D

Reviewer: Deindae
Date: 12/17/08 20:05
Chapter: The Other Weasley

yeah... at least it isn't rose...

Reviewer: Forget-Me-Not9614
Date: 08/21/08 23:59
Chapter: The Other Weasley

WHOA! Wasn't suspecting that one! Brilliant!

~lauren.

Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 08/17/08 13:35
Chapter: The Other Weasley

that made me laugh out loud its so wierd i love it lol

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/08/08 13:25
Chapter: The Other Weasley

U have got to be kidding!!
Is Malfoy really that intent for his son not to be with a Weasley that he would bypass the fact that his son was gay?!
GREAT story!! 4 stars!!

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: vadha
Date: 06/29/08 20:32
Chapter: The Other Weasley

ok now that WAS surprising!

Reviewer: wyoming150
Date: 06/18/08 20:45
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Ha Ha! Very good, I don't normally like slashes, but this one was quite funny.

Reviewer: Flairstar
Date: 06/08/08 4:55
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Ha Ha Ha well at least it wasnt Rose.....

Greatly enjoyable, i dont know what he'll of found worse staying with the Potters or dating a Weasley!

Reviewer: Akihcur
Date: 05/31/08 11:55
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Gud one..hehe..u shud take more homewrk breaks!

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 05/28/08 21:23
Chapter: The Other Weasley

thats actually kind of cute...

Reviewer: dracoweasley
Date: 05/26/08 17:12
Chapter: The Other Weasley

Oh my God. That was...wow... I haven't laughed like that a long, long time. Thanks so much for that.
~Claire

Reviewer: Draco Malfoy is HOT
Date: 05/09/08 1:32
Chapter: The Other Weasley

yay that was a nice story, thanks!

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