Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 10/20/06 20:04
Chapter: one-shot

It was kind of confusing, working out who said what.

For example, when Lily was trying to tell him she was in love with him too, she yelled, "IíM-IN-LOVE-WITH-YOU-TOO!", but then it said "He froze."

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 10/16/06 18:12
Chapter: one-shot

omg soo good great feel good story made me feel better!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/19/06 14:49
Chapter: one-shot

Its lovely - short but sweet.

Reviewer: daddys_little_girl
Date: 08/31/06 12:29
Chapter: one-shot

three words!
totally-corny

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 08/03/06 19:20
Chapter: one-shot

aww...soo cute...loved it

Reviewer: parry_otter90210
Date: 07/13/06 9:25
Chapter: one-shot

Awwww that is sooooooooo sweet! i love it!

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 07/07/06 13:04
Chapter: one-shot

haha, here are a little more than 5 seconds. I loved it.

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 06/18/06 0:23
Chapter: one-shot

i was cute a fluffy i like fluffy one-shots, i like long stories too but when you just got a minuit or are angry or something and need to be cheered up fluffy little one-shots do the trick

Reviewer: truelove38851
Date: 06/06/06 17:59
Chapter: one-shot

that was soo cute it reminds me of when my friend fell in love

Reviewer: Monster Book of Monsters
Date: 05/29/06 14:04
Chapter: one-shot

I didn't catch the publication date on this fic before I started reading, but you're one of my fav authors for your H/G work - and I was curious - so I thought I'd give a James/Lily fic a shot. So 1) you should be happy that you're one of my fav authors of all time, and 2) your's is the first James/Lilly fic I ever thought to read. Having said those nice things, I think I can ease into the crap review I have to leave for this story. There were a lot of grammatical errors. And the way the point of view changed around and stuff - sometimes I had a hard time understanding who was doing what. The dialogue was good but poorly written with lots of errors. C'mon now... you're a really good writer with fantastic ideas. Don't let simple writing errors bog your story down. You're too good for that.

Reviewer: angel_charlie
Date: 05/22/06 10:40
Chapter: one-shot

This was beautiful! Why can't I have someone like James! :(xx weldone! c'est tres bien! xx (I have no idea where the French came frome :S)

Reviewer: hogwartswannabe
Date: 05/10/06 1:03
Chapter: one-shot

i definitely loved it!!

Reviewer: loonyluna63
Date: 04/30/06 11:59
Chapter: one-shot

i liked it. We all know James shy side and you portrayed it great. I really liked it! keep writing!

Reviewer: fluffahoy
Date: 04/25/06 5:30
Chapter: one-shot

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am dying with the praise that is pouring out of me which i can t fit into a page coz this was so awesomely cool and realistic and...ahem. I think I'd better takke control of myself, think ya understand what I mean anyways. Keep it up man!!!

Reviewer: princess of sparx
Date: 04/22/06 17:12
Chapter: one-shot

awwwwwww soooooo cute

Reviewer: MrsPhineasNigellus
Date: 04/20/06 15:13
Chapter: one-shot

Oh, that was sweet! Good job, I loved how you showed Lily's thoughts. That was funny. Props!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/19/06 13:31
Chapter: one-shot

Awww...now, EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 04/10/06 17:18
Chapter: one-shot

Awww, short and sweet!!! I really liked it - Keep writting!!!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 04/09/06 19:02
Chapter: one-shot

i liked it it was very sweet

Reviewer: eightysbangs
Date: 04/08/06 20:31
Chapter: one-shot

i loved it! pretty sure....i screamed at the end and now im giddy...good job!

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