I really like how the conversation was realistically awkward, not overly so, but they didn't just start talking either.
Awww... tgat's so cute!
Loved James's shyness... SO ADORABLE!
Ahhhh, that was sweet. I liked it.
I liked it 'coz it was blunt, sweet and simple.
Books that have too many chapters... I'm not that keen on them.
I loved it. However, in your Author's Note, your "txt tlk" bothered me. Anyways, it was a fantastic story.
way to go lily! that's why she's a griffy i guess....
really nicely written. i liked James' interactions with the little kid. they were exactly like i would imagine james would be like with someone who needed help. Great job!
i liked it. keep writing
thats so cute , loved it :] keeps writing
this was really sweet. it is hard to picture James helping a little boy learn how to fly.
THat was a really sweet and good story
I most certainly liked it! I love those sweet type of stories, you know, where lily sees james in a different light, and then they realize they like eachother.......I like never get sick of these......great job!
It was real good, it just skipped stuff a lot, it was really fast-ish. It just wasn't all that deep like your other ones. It really didn't show all their 'awww, lovey dovey complicated hate/love relationship' But still, I REALLY LOVED IT anyway! I'm actually kind sorta like in love with James. (geez, how embarrassing. he's not real!) so any James/Lily fics are my faves! Well, most... As long as I like 'em! (that made no sense...yes it did...Oh, whatever!)
i love it cause it is just so sweet!
I thought it was a very cute story and I liked all of it except for the end, the "I was all his" and "he had me". Maybe it's just me. Very good story though
i absolutely loved it!
Aw, sweet! That was really adorable! A bit short, but it was very good. I liked being in Lily's head.