Reviewer: Maddie Potter
Date: 03/19/12 2:57
Chapter: one-shot

I really like how the conversation was realistically awkward, not overly so, but they didn't just start talking either.

Reviewer: HermioneJeanPotter
Date: 10/11/11 2:38
Chapter: one-shot

Awww... tgat's so cute!

Reviewer: fred_ron_weasley
Date: 03/02/11 8:02
Chapter: one-shot

Loved James's shyness... SO ADORABLE!

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/06/08 16:35
Chapter: one-shot

Ahhhh, that was sweet. I liked it.

Reviewer: lily_james_fan
Date: 07/22/08 13:32
Chapter: one-shot

I liked it 'coz it was blunt, sweet and simple.
Books that have too many chapters... I'm not that keen on them.
Great job!!!***

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/23/08 15:44
Chapter: one-shot

I loved it. However, in your Author's Note, your "txt tlk" bothered me. Anyways, it was a fantastic story.

Reviewer: pathseekerme
Date: 06/07/08 1:09
Chapter: one-shot

Kewl!

Reviewer: lilys fairy
Date: 04/04/08 12:22
Chapter: one-shot

way to go lily! that's why she's a griffy i guess....
really nicely written. i liked James' interactions with the little kid. they were exactly like i would imagine james would be like with someone who needed help. Great job!

Reviewer: R_U_LDS_2
Date: 11/08/07 18:26
Chapter: one-shot

i liked it. keep writing

Reviewer: BertieBott
Date: 10/25/07 23:16
Chapter: one-shot

awww

Reviewer: CookieMonsterLovee
Date: 08/26/07 2:58
Chapter: one-shot

thats so cute , loved it :] keeps writing

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 07/31/07 9:53
Chapter: one-shot

this was really sweet. it is hard to picture James helping a little boy learn how to fly.

Reviewer: Ginevra Potter 17
Date: 07/29/07 21:26
Chapter: one-shot

THat was a really sweet and good story

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 07/07/07 19:54
Chapter: one-shot

I most certainly liked it! I love those sweet type of stories, you know, where lily sees james in a different light, and then they realize they like eachother.......I like never get sick of these......great job!

Reviewer: smexi_penguin_001
Date: 03/28/07 18:55
Chapter: one-shot

LOVED IT!!

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/04/07 12:30
Chapter: one-shot

It was real good, it just skipped stuff a lot, it was really fast-ish. It just wasn't all that deep like your other ones. It really didn't show all their 'awww, lovey dovey complicated hate/love relationship' But still, I REALLY LOVED IT anyway! I'm actually kind sorta like in love with James. (geez, how embarrassing. he's not real!) so any James/Lily fics are my faves! Well, most... As long as I like 'em! (that made no sense...yes it did...Oh, whatever!)

Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 02/25/07 21:38
Chapter: one-shot

i love it cause it is just so sweet!

Reviewer: Maire Potter
Date: 02/13/07 17:58
Chapter: one-shot

I thought it was a very cute story and I liked all of it except for the end, the "I was all his" and "he had me". Maybe it's just me. Very good story though

Reviewer: ginny_wizzy
Date: 02/07/07 18:14
Chapter: one-shot

i absolutely loved it!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/28/06 19:29
Chapter: one-shot

Aw, sweet! That was really adorable! A bit short, but it was very good. I liked being in Lily's head.

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