This is an interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it. I really like your description of the diary and where Lily got it. There are a lot of diary stories, but this one seems unique. I'll keep an eye out for it.
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Author's Response: Thanks! I've read a few of those diary stories and it's kind of clichéd now, but I thought that maybe, hopefully, I could make a unique one. I've also thought about not doing it in diary form/ part diary form but it wouldn't work with my plot. I'm so glad that you think that it's one of the unique ones!