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Reviewer: draco_rulz
Date: 10/20/09 4:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW!!!!
i dont know what else to say!
:)

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 02/20/09 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! You write as the new Pansy really well!!!

Reviewer: BittersweetLove
Date: 07/14/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was really amazing. It almost made me cry, which is saying something if you knew me. I don't really read much Draco/Pansy stuff, but I decided to take a chance. Good job!

Author's Response: Really, it almost made you cry? Thats really cool! No, never mind, ignore that, it makes me sound really mean. I meant its cool that it touched you so much:) Thanks for this!

Reviewer: hplover411
Date: 06/11/08 18:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was kind sad but I loved it. It's a great starter story! Peace!

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 04/22/08 20:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow... this is definetely the BEST draco-pansy i've ever read! you do a great job of making them both human and yet true to the books... great one-shot!!

Author's Response: Awh. Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: nargle_infested_wand
Date: 04/16/08 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, this was only a one shot? Well, it was really good.

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 04/16/08 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey, this was good! Unrequited love--or unfulfilled, I should say--is sad. But I liked this plot line. My favourite lines: Whatever Draco wants Draco gets; and then the last line too. :) The only thing that got me was the brief switch to first person somewhere near the end. If it's in Pansy's point of view, maybe make it stand out as hers, so that it's clearer. Good job!

Author's Response: Wow. I didn't even notice that til now. Thanks for pointinmg it out. And thanks even more for the review!

Author's Response: Wow. I didn't even notice that til now. Thanks for pointinmg it out. And thanks even more for the review!

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