Reviews For Sunday Breezes
Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 04/12/08 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice! I love how Hermione got Ron to play the sax. Very unique.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a sax player myself, so when the challenge said to put in a woodwind instrument, I couldn't resist. I feel honored to get a review from you.

Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 04/11/08 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

It's unbelievable that Hermione is as patient as that and her being pregnant and everything but I guess love conquers all. If only Ron realizes that.
Anyway, it's a very nice read. ^_^

Author's Response: I find it hard to capture Hermione just right, but she's usually more patient when she's happy, and she's happy with Ron.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/11/08 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good. I like your descriptions - very easy to visualize what is happening. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 04/10/08 22:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

ha, Ron learning to play the sax! Love that part, considering that I am a musician myself (I have been playing violin since I was eight. I am seventeen now).

Author's Response: Well, I had to pay an homage to my instrument, 'cept I don't play tenor, but I figured it was more masculine.

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 04/10/08 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ah. Who dosn't love silver?

You have a greet grasp of the Hermione/Ron relationship, which i know from experience is very hard to write properly. It's nice to hear about hermione and ron living in (semi) harmony.

Great job and keep writting!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried quite hard to get them just right. It was worth it.

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