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Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 22:12 · For: Chapter 1
Oh this was so cute!! and funny!! Absolutely hilarious! Poor Neville goes through alot to save his sanity, including bustin' it past Snape! So cool! And to use the darkness spell, awesome!
Snape probably turned inside out, wondering what happened to that little dunderhead, Longbottom!
Hope Neville's gran soes'nt hear about her grandson's streaking adventure!
Great story!!

Author's Response: Thank you! As for Neville's gran, you know what they say in the wizarding world--what happens at Hogwarts, stays at Hogwarts. Or something like that.

Name: Crows (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 21:21 · For: Chapter 1

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 20:18 · For: Chapter 1
lol! wow! i laughed out loud in some parts! haha i really liked it! dumbledore was so in charactor!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Name: Sly One (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 19:09 · For: Chapter 1

WOW!!! I is very hard to keep up that level of action and sustain that much effort for that long! And Dumbledore's reaction was so in character!!! I mean the man never got ruffled LOL! I can see Neville falling for the gag, I can see Neville being the victim of such a gag.  All very in character!  And his reaction  was so perfect to the confident, true Gryffindor Neville we know he became! So bravo writing a coming of age story so comically! You got some skills, gonna check out your other stories!



Author's Response: Thank you very much! As my longer work has been on hiatus while I've been working on other non-HP projects, I'm glad you enjoyed this inspired piece of silliness. Thanks for the review!

Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 18:31 · For: Chapter 1
THIS IS AMAZING. I laughed so hard at the part about Dumbledore, but I love how the story wasn't completely silly-- it was really somehow believable. I also adored the idea of Humbert the Lewd... how is it possible to write something so awesome? I also thought it was cool when Neville punched the twins... and when Peeves sang his song, of course.

He had suffered several nightmares during his time at Hogwarts, some of them involving him naked, some of them involving Snape, but in his most terrible imaginings had he ever combined the two. Hmm, I've had dreams that combine Snape and nakedness, but I can't say they're nightmares... mwahaha, just kidding. This was incredibly good, and I hope you can write more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. It's a bit of a departure from what I normally write and I was hoping other people would see humor in the same things that I did. As to how it's possible to write this, I must say that it's not as great as all that, but I appreciate the inflation of my ego that comes with such great reviews. Thanks again!

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