Reviewer: x Siriusly Black x
Date: 04/23/08 19:35
Chapter: In Hopes That As Time Passes

I'll edit out some of the "In hope that as time passes...". Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: x Siriusly Black x
Date: 04/23/08 19:30
Chapter: In Hopes That As Time Passes

Thanks!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 04/18/08 22:53
Chapter: In Hopes That As Time Passes

Sweet poem! Fits well with the Snape/Lily ship. My favorite stanza is the last one. =]

My only nitpick is that the line "In hope that as time passes…" didn't seem to fit to well in some places and so it seemed a bit repetetive.


Great job on this piece! Keep writing!

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