I'll edit out some of the "In hope that as time passes...". Thanks so much for reviewing!
Sweet poem! Fits well with the Snape/Lily ship. My favorite stanza is the last one. =]
My only nitpick is that the line "In hope that as time passes…" didn't seem to fit to well in some places and so it seemed a bit repetetive.
Great job on this piece! Keep writing!