Really wonderful story.I am speechless.
I thought it was amazingly sweet! You turly captured how James loved Lily so much and would do anything for her! I truly appreciated the story and can't wait to read any others of yours!
Oh wow. This story brought tears to my eyes (in a good way.) That was beautiful and touching and everything good. :)
Wonderful! Wonderful! Bravo! Bravo! Marvelous! Marvelous! Very emotional, very! emotional. I could feel Lily's pain and suffering and James' frustratedness. Beautiful1 Beautiful story!
That was very sweet. I like to think of James like that, like he would of waited forever for Lily to realize that she loved him. Good job:)
Wow. I love how you brought out the sensitive side of James that we all have, and the 'song' verses added a nice touch. Good story!
Aww!! This was such a sweet story. ireally REALY loved reading it. You have a lot of writing talent. I am eagerly awaiting many more of your awesome Lily/James fanfics
ALL THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!