This poem is BEAUTIFUL. First of all, I love the title. It conjures up images of fire that make me think of Lily and, of course, her "flaming red hair." You have succeeded in portraying a desperate, loving, passionate Snape, which should be praised. Additionally, this poem has helped me realize that I'm way too much of an HP fan... because it made me cry. Seriously.
Author's Response: So, I accidentally reviewed my own poem instead of responding. Thank you for the nice review!
This was a very interesting piece. The flaming red hair kept bringing to mind Lily. Is that whom you were referring to?
Anyways, I liked the structure and repetition of this poem. Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, it's a Snape/Lily poem :). Thanks for the review!