lol, i thaught u were going nuts when u said luna and harry,*gasps for air* nice story, a bit annoying with all the caps in a row, not really being able to distinguish who was saying what and when, butr hey im commenting and unless i really like it, i refuse to comment. well done
wow... that was good. lol i started laughing when he proposed... i liked it!
wow... that was good. lol i started laughing when he proposed... i liked it!
Um, well this story is okay I guess, but I think its just not up to my standards. Its a bit too quick paced and not nearly descriptive enough. Also, its a little cheesy ;-)
Um, well this story is okay I guess, but I think its just not up to my standards. Its a bit too quick paced and not nearly descriptive enough. Also, its a little cheesy ;-)
Um, well this story is okay I guess, but I think its just not up to my standards. Its a bit too quick paced and not nearly descriptive enough. Also, its a little cheesy ;-)
more please....its good, it all happened a bit quick but heck it took them 10 years to realize it. i like how harry said IT TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH which could apply to either them realizing its his birthday or that they are meant to be
sorry, my other review was for another one...
This fic is exactly 250 words.... how did you get it on?!?!?!?
Oh my God! That was kind of wow! That was great really good. I especially like the last part where Hermione and Ron remember that it's Harry's birthday and Harry says "TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH" That was a very good fanfic!
It was good! You're a really good writer, but there were two things I didn't like about it- 1. How the trio didn't meet face to face for three years 2. How Ron just proposes to Hermione on the spot. Don't get me wrong it's an awesome fic! I really enjoyed it!
That story was way cool. It went really fast though so that`s where you lost a point. I`d love for you to continue this story but in future chapters don`t go through all that stuff too fast. I loved your story.
That story was way cool. It went really fast though so that`s where you lost a point. I`d love for you to continue this story but in future chapters don`t go through all that stuff too fast. I loved your story.
fast dramatic, and great. but after three years of not seeing eachother would they just atomatically get ingaged?? hmmm intresting to think about though
It was cool! Them having an arguement like that in the middle of a bar is a little wierd, as is the fact that he just came out and he loved her. You'd think he would have done that earlier if he really cared about her. Good for a first fic. Write more.
