Wow! That was amazing!!! Awesome. I always thought romance was difficult to write... You make it look easy enough.
James/Lily is one of my all-time favorite pairings (along with Sirius/Bridget. That's one of the main ones in my MWPP fic. The reason I like it so much: My grandmother has nicknamed me Bridget, and as a simple exucse to pair myself ith Sirius, I have decided to name his girlfriend Bridget. haha. I'm obsessed) so when I read your bio and saw that you wrote all J/L fics, I almost fainted. I'm still ecstatic about it.
I know I used to ask you out a lot, and say I loved you every other week (except for the time I serenaded you at breakfast—but I guess you don’t really want to remember that).
^^cracked up. probably one of the most hilarious things James could've done.
I’m just really not that good with feelings. That’s Remus’ department.
^^It shows. Feelings probably are Remus's department, what with the whole serenading in breakfast... great job! {BeccA}
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!! Yes, J/L is my favorite pairing because so much of their personalities is left up to the author--I have much more freedom to write what I want to write. I'm glad you laughed at that part...poor James with his unrequited "love". Thanks again for reviewing!
see this is what all girls wont a guy to love her and not to think he love's her and mack's a todilo fool out of him salf that's just stupid but i loved this story it made me laugh in tell i cried
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it; thanks for reviewing!
Ooh I absolutely LOVED it! It was so beautiful adn real to me... Don't I wish I were Lily! Great job, really really great job!
Author's Response: thanks; I'm glad you related to it. Thanks for reviewing!
Ohh, this is beautifully written. I love it to pieces. I really can't say any more than that-- this is amazing.
Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
that was absolutely beautiful. I cannot imagine writing something that deep. That was moving, it was an amazing story, and i cannot wait to read the sequel.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! As for your writing, the more you read, the better you get at writing yourself (personally, I'm partial to Jane Austen...). Thanks for reviewing!
I certainly hope you continue this! It would make a great prologue to a story leading to their wedding. I love the characterization of James in this letter. Great job!
Author's Response: One-Way Street is the sequel, Lily's response (but that story won't have a sequel). I'm so happy you liked how I wrote James. Thanks for reviewing!
i love this fanfic! It is very good! Love it! I do have a question though, are you going to post a sequel to it describing Lily's thoughts and emotions on this letter from James? It'd be cool if you did. =D Anyway, great fic!
Author's Response: I just submitted the sequel, One-Way Street. I'm so glad you liked this fic, and thanks for reviewing!
AAAAAWWWWW
*coughs* sorry about that
I like this, it is now one of my favorite fics. I love how you wrote this, how you explained everything. It was sweet, funny, romantic, and sad all at the same time. This is a story that I will probably come back to read again and again. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate so much that you will reread this fic, and everything you liked about it. Thanks for reviewing!
This was really sweet! You should write another chapter where Lily reads this letter. Anyway, great job!!!
Have Fun and Happy Writing!
~Hannah
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing and keep an eye out for the sequel!
Aw!!! I loved that so much
Aw, you totally should write Lily's response :) I would totally love that!! Please :)
Author's Response: I'm thinking I probably won't...but I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
Aw!!!! that was so sweet! every girl wishes that she had a letter like that written to her at least once in her life; Lily is the lucky one. That was GREAT!!! :)
i liked the fact that it was in James's pov
i liked the fact that it was in James's pov
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think people write from his pov enough, because he's much more vulnerable and whether Lily likes him or not is less in his control...anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Wow. That was amazing! Great Job!
Author's Response: thanks!
Ahhh! This was so fantastic!!!!! I absolutely loved this. Is there a return letter from Lily anywhere?
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I am considering writing Lily's response, but I'm not sure yet... Thanks so much for reviewing!
AWWWWW!!!!!!! THat was beautiful!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
