Awww!!!! That was awesome! I loved how....how it followed the only piece of how Lily and James got together that JK Rowling gave us, and yet...it was totally different than any other fan-fiction. She wasn't head over heels for him, her friends weren't involved....She wasn't the first to make a move like in most of the others...She wasn't indecisive and changed in between...Wow. That was...amazing.
This one needs you to add more to it....
I really liked all of it...but the last couple paragraphs seemed weaker than the rest of the story (and I missed James' crooked smile!)
:O you write the best stories!
WOW. great job! loved the ending.
confusing but good
Aw! I loved it!
I think it is a confussing one shot myself.
awwwww. i want a james.
Made me wanna cry!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!
THAT was ggoooooodd. It was so cute! You are a really good romance writer, know that?? : D
wow heart touching story =)
Loved it. Please update soon! I'm a sucker for mushy stuff.
i loved it, it was so sweet and honest and realistic or well every girl's dream!!
Oh my gosh!!!!!!! The end is so cute!
I thought it was extremely cute. The only part of this story that I didn't think was as good was Lily's realization of her feelings. There were a few teeny misunderstandings on her part in my point of veiw, like she didn't explain everything to the reader. Other than that it was an awesome story. I love fluffy stuff like this. Totally keep up the good work. Very cute. I give it an 8/10