Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 04/26/10 1:50
Chapter: Chapter Eighteen: That's What Happens When You're A Bloody Gryffindor

I like how Scorpius and Rosie have a big fight the first day back. It gives the year a crazy kick off. I cant wait to see what else you have in store for this school year! I also wonder what will happen with the rest of Scorpius' friends, will they all react like Zabini or will they accept Rosie? I hope the rest will accept her and Scorpius together. I cant wait to for their detentions for a week together, that should be fun!

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 04/24/10 9:54
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

Great story! Well written, wonderful characterization. This is just how I pictured all the Second Generation. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 04/23/10 2:17
Chapter: Chapter Seventeen: Stinging Hexes and Summer Days

Nice chapter!

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 04/23/10 1:22
Chapter: Chapter Seventeen: Stinging Hexes and Summer Days

Another fun chapter. I thought this one was a little bit lighter (not as much story-advancing or romance-advancing material) as some of the others, but good nonetheless.
I have to admit that I'm shocked Rose got any A's. Maybe it's me, but I always thought that, like her mother, she'd be able to find a way to do well, no matter what kind of distractions Scorpius (or Harry and Ron) provided. Maybe not 12 O's, but not A's. Ah well, such is the beauty of creative license.

Reviewer: ritapotter
Date: 04/01/10 5:26
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

this is one of the best rose scorpius. you write very well

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 03/31/10 11:22
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

Just read both this and the previous chapter...LOVED them! The storming of Malfoy Manor had me giggling! The actual storming had me a little more on edge...Poor Lily...

Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 03/29/10 4:57
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

very interesting. I hope to hear more of it.

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/27/10 21:42
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

I =} always when reading this story

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/27/10 21:26
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

Please make the next chapter soon!! I'm sooooo bored without this book! Or, well, I guess it is more a fic isn't it.

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/25/10 18:29
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

Wow, what an amazing chapter! But now I'm all caught up :(! Oh well, just do the next chapter soon and it will all be ok.

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/25/10 17:16
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: The Wedding, Part Two

"sex on a chair" creative. Yet amusing.

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/25/10 16:44
Chapter: Chapter Ten: OWLs and an Invitation

It's so cool how you always end with a cliff hanger! I would never be able to do that! Although, since I'm reading this when many more chapters are written, I don't have to wait

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/25/10 15:25
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch Fever

That chaper was rather exciteing! I couldn't look away!

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/25/10 14:10
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Very Un-Merry Christmas

Awwww, poor rose. Although I don't think she should talk to Ron if he is going to be such a, a, well, a WEASLY about it lol

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 03/25/10 13:21
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

Lol this is sooooo funny

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 03/23/10 18:12
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

I love this chapter!!! It is very interesting to hear from someone other than Rosie and Scorpius!!! I wouldn't mind see this more often!!! lol I do truly like what you did for this chapter!!!

Reviewer: Cailet
Date: 03/23/10 17:57
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

I noticed that Scorpius didn't seem surprised by Draco's stinging hex, or the severity of Lily's symptoms. Sounds like he may have personal experience in being on the receiving end of that spell. You are really making my heart break for him in this story.

Please please please keep going on this one, it's brilliant!

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 03/23/10 5:45
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!


Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 03/23/10 0:56
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

That. Was. Awesome.

I totally heart the raid, from start to finish, even though Lily got hurt. That was the one thing that could spur our new POV of the chapter into a decent rage. Piss on Draco anyhow for hexing a little gir. >:o

I really thought it was brilliant to use James instead of Rose or Scorpius for this part, because he represents the opposite end of the spectrum in terms of just how much Scorpius is not liked by half the Weasley/Potter cousins. It would have been much more difficult to capture that withough this POV, so yay for you.

I like the grudging truce between James and Scorpius, for James, IMO, was the last roadblock between Scorpius and acceptance by Rose's family. Of the cousins, he is the most anti-Malfoy.

I do wonder, however, how a winning-crazed Quidditch maniac like James would ever consent to helping an opponent retrieve his broomstick. I don't know if this is a new leaf for James or just something that I'm overthinking, but if I were James, I'd tell Rose to screw off, even if she did threaten him. He's just as ridiculously competitive as I am.

I do wonder, though - was Draco trying to curse the Weasley clan because they were stealing a broom, or was he exacting revenge for his money being 'stolen.' This should be interesting to see in later chapters, the backlash from this event. The parents will eventually find out - they always do - and that will definitely be hairy for our heroes, as well.

Well, anyhow, not the greatest review in the world, but I just wanted to check in and say that I loved your heist. It was spectacular.

Take care and happy writing,


Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 03/21/10 19:06
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

cant wait for the next chapter! no literally, i cant wait

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