Great story! Well written, wonderful characterization. This is just how I pictured all the Second Generation. Can't wait to read more.
Nice chapter!
Another fun chapter. I thought this one was a little bit lighter (not as much story-advancing or romance-advancing material) as some of the others, but good nonetheless.
I have to admit that I'm shocked Rose got any A's. Maybe it's me, but I always thought that, like her mother, she'd be able to find a way to do well, no matter what kind of distractions Scorpius (or Harry and Ron) provided. Maybe not 12 O's, but not A's. Ah well, such is the beauty of creative license.
this is one of the best rose scorpius. you write very well
Just read both this and the previous chapter...LOVED them! The storming of Malfoy Manor had me giggling! The actual storming had me a little more on edge...Poor Lily...
very interesting. I hope to hear more of it.
I =} always when reading this story
Please make the next chapter soon!! I'm sooooo bored without this book! Or, well, I guess it is more a fic isn't it.
Wow, what an amazing chapter! But now I'm all caught up :(! Oh well, just do the next chapter soon and it will all be ok.
"sex on a chair" creative. Yet amusing.
It's so cool how you always end with a cliff hanger! I would never be able to do that! Although, since I'm reading this when many more chapters are written, I don't have to wait
That chaper was rather exciteing! I couldn't look away!
Awwww, poor rose. Although I don't think she should talk to Ron if he is going to be such a, a, well, a WEASLY about it lol
Lol this is sooooo funny
I love this chapter!!! It is very interesting to hear from someone other than Rosie and Scorpius!!! I wouldn't mind see this more often!!! lol I do truly like what you did for this chapter!!!
I noticed that Scorpius didn't seem surprised by Draco's stinging hex, or the severity of Lily's symptoms. Sounds like he may have personal experience in being on the receiving end of that spell. You are really making my heart break for him in this story.
Please please please keep going on this one, it's brilliant!
POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That. Was. Awesome.
I totally heart the raid, from start to finish, even though Lily got hurt. That was the one thing that could spur our new POV of the chapter into a decent rage. Piss on Draco anyhow for hexing a little gir. >:o
I really thought it was brilliant to use James instead of Rose or Scorpius for this part, because he represents the opposite end of the spectrum in terms of just how much Scorpius is not liked by half the Weasley/Potter cousins. It would have been much more difficult to capture that withough this POV, so yay for you.
I like the grudging truce between James and Scorpius, for James, IMO, was the last roadblock between Scorpius and acceptance by Rose's family. Of the cousins, he is the most anti-Malfoy.
I do wonder, however, how a winning-crazed Quidditch maniac like James would ever consent to helping an opponent retrieve his broomstick. I don't know if this is a new leaf for James or just something that I'm overthinking, but if I were James, I'd tell Rose to screw off, even if she did threaten him. He's just as ridiculously competitive as I am.
I do wonder, though - was Draco trying to curse the Weasley clan because they were stealing a broom, or was he exacting revenge for his money being 'stolen.' This should be interesting to see in later chapters, the backlash from this event. The parents will eventually find out - they always do - and that will definitely be hairy for our heroes, as well.
Well, anyhow, not the greatest review in the world, but I just wanted to check in and say that I loved your heist. It was spectacular.
Take care and happy writing,
Jess
cant wait for the next chapter! no literally, i cant wait
it upsets me that pansy parkinson didnt marry draco! but that wouldnt play well into the plot... shes too prideful to be an achoholic
