Reviewer: keara96
Date: 10/30/10 12:02
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

I really enjoyed reading this story. I loved the way you portayed all the characters. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Georgina1994
Date: 09/28/10 8:40
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Your stories are amazing
i love how you keep the stories of all the next-gen kids tied in together and it is so so so goood
keep writing

Reviewer: Georgina1994
Date: 09/28/10 4:31
Chapter: Chapter Two: Of Quidditch And A Certain Slytherin

i like this :)

Reviewer: GreenEggsAndSam
Date: 09/24/10 19:43
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Very Un-Merry Christmas

The only issue I had with this chapter is that Ginny Harry and Ron were very "disgusted" etc. about the whole malfoy situation. Harry and Ginny would not be unsupportive considering that they were civil with malfoy. Ron may freak out but i'm not too sure about ginny and harry.just a note :)

Reviewer: GreenEggsAndSam
Date: 09/24/10 19:30
Chapter: Chapter Three: Hogsmeade Can Be More Interesting Than You’d Expect

"you shouldn’t have to be anywhere near me" and "There’s never going to be a romantic fairytale." seem a bit cliche lines to me. i think you could add a bit more personalty to certain lines similar to this but overall i love the story. it's very entertaining :) also the "Rose Weasley,’ he said, ‘will you go out with me" seems more like a marriage proposal than a date invitation

Reviewer: CoolCatElly
Date: 09/10/10 18:06
Chapter: Chapter Four: You're Dating Who?

Love it!
xxx

Your yes-I-give-up-now-and-am-going-to-bed fan
Elly

Reviewer: CoolCatElly
Date: 09/10/10 17:58
Chapter: Chapter Three: Hogsmeade Can Be More Interesting Than You’d Expect

NAwwwwww

That was cute! Nice and fluffy

Reviewer: CoolCatElly
Date: 09/10/10 17:37
Chapter: Chapter Two: Of Quidditch And A Certain Slytherin

Another cute chapter :-D

It all seems very puppy-loveish at the moment, I wonder if that will change later on?

xxx
Your Still-reading-at-midnight fa
Elly

Reviewer: CoolCatElly
Date: 09/10/10 16:49
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

Well, for a ... 15 year old? This story is superbly well written. Very funny, and generally an entertaining read.

I have to say, I never really thought about the Potter and Weasley invasion in Hogwarts in next-gen. 11 of them!?! That's insane.

xxxx
Your now-converted-to-next-gen fan
Elly

Reviewer: KatelynCamila
Date: 08/22/10 18:14
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch Fever

I cannot stop reading to leave a real comment. Sorry.

Reviewer: rebeccamandy
Date: 07/10/10 7:12
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

i've been reading for the past 7 hours and im so sad that im finished! this is one of the best fics ive read on here, good job!

Reviewer: Miss B
Date: 06/28/10 1:32
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

This is an amazing story. That took me a week to read! You're a really good writer; I wish I could be as good as you. I loved it.

Reviewer: Rawlings
Date: 06/27/10 0:17
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

LOLi laughed my butt off

Reviewer: Rawlings
Date: 06/25/10 23:47
Chapter: Chapter Ten: OWLs and an Invitation

i know i wrote a thousand reviews but her it goes.
This chapter was great! they get better and better as they incilen.

Reviewer: Rawlings
Date: 06/25/10 23:29
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch Fever

This chapter was outstanding they really take their love to another place. I LOVE YOU is dangerous but for them it works just right.

Reviewer: Rawlings
Date: 06/25/10 15:02
Chapter: Chapter Two: Of Quidditch And A Certain Slytherin

amzing! better than the firsst

Reviewer: MerrryD
Date: 06/23/10 23:57
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Dearest Jen,

I just wanted to tell you that I spent the past two nights reading this and it's utterly fantastic and completely wonderful. ♥ I'm sososososo proud of you for completing it. You're truly talented and I hope you never stop writing, ever, and I hope that I'll always be able to enjoy it. :) *hugs*

Love you lots,
Mere

Reviewer: boqiex3
Date: 06/12/10 15:36
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

so i just spend most of my day reading this fic. i think its absolutly fantastic!! you have amazing writing skills and thought of a great story! Great job!!

Reviewer: Calll Me Pants
Date: 06/12/10 0:16
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

way to go! it was great...the journey's worth it if the conclusion deserves it...and that was my deep moment of the day :D i just loved how you developed scorpius's character..and your story was one of the few i have read that actually convinced me it was taking place in harry's wonderful world!(:

Reviewer: Calll Me Pants
Date: 06/12/10 0:15
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

way to go! it was great...the journey's worth it if the conclusion deserves it...and that was my deep moment of the day :D i just loved how you developed scorpius's character..and your story was one of the few i have read that actually convinced me it was taking place in harry's wonderful world!(:

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