Reviewer: FredForever82
Date: 09/04/14 23:47
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

O my gosh I love this story!! I really enjoy reading Rose/Scorpius fanfics, and you just did a wonderful job in developing their relationship. Part of me didn't want the story to end. I was thinking that perhaps you could write it in Albus's point of view or maybe continue the story but again in Albus's point of view. Just a thought. Once again GREAT job on the story, LOVED every bit of it.

Reviewer: ilyjean
Date: 12/22/12 10:04
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

AAHHHH!!!!! Amazing! I am currently really tired as I have stayed up REALLY late the last two nights reading it!
It was an absolutely amazing story, beautifully written. It was definitely one of the best fanfic, of any kind, that I have ever read.
I adore all the character development and surprises and ABSOLUTELY EVERYHING that you have done with the story!
I love how long it was, because good, long fics like this are hard to find!

Favourite Chapter- I don't have one! They were all so good! I even liked what you did with the Quidditch matches because some authors make the really boring, but not you!
Favourite Character- Scorpius and Draco. I loved the fact that they both had a lot of background to the character and lots of character and development. And for the fact I am just literally in love with the Malfoy bad boys :)
Favourite Quote- That would have to be in Chapter Six, when Scorpius asks Ben what he wants and Ben replies something like "Rosie. Kindly give her back." Or something. Just the way I imagined that happening and all made me actually laugh out loud.

I need to now read all of your stories! You should DEFINETLY write a Maurauders Era one if you haven't yet, with some Jily! I think you would be able to write them all perfectly!
But all in all, amazing story! Keep writing! And I need to sleep now! Bye!

Reviewer: AlwaysSnily
Date: 09/03/12 2:58
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Your story blew my mind. I had to remind myself you weren't JK Rowling to keep myself from utterly fangirling. And even then it was hard; when I saw the word 'fin' I literally almost screamed. I don't know why, but rest assured it's a good thing. Anyway, I'm begging you for a sequel. I need to find out how Scorpius proposes. He does, right? So incredibly good. I think now I'll go check if that duck pond scene you mentioned is published. Cheers! Keep writing amazing fanfics that half-convince me you're our Queen herself!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 06/18/12 23:50
Chapter: Chapter Six: How Not To Hide A Relationship With Your Supposed Enemy

This is a fantastic story! I love how well defined each of the characters are. I love how when they were all in the Burrow, everyone's voices weren't identified- it really gave me the feeling that everyone was shouting and there was a mass breakout of chaos. :D
I have one question though. You said there were 10 other cousins- I thought there were 12 cousins in total? Also, how old is Lucy in your story, and what year is Lily in?
Great job, you're a fantastic writer! :D

Reviewer: leckleck
Date: 04/24/12 14:28
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Loved this so much! I started this last evening and read close to 12 am, then got up early this morning to finish it! Overall it was excellent writing, there were certain little mistakes and things I would have loved to hear more about, such as Hogsmeade and Scorpious, Rose and friends sneaking around Hogwarts after hours, but I just loved this. One of the only super long fics that kept me wanting more.

Reviewer: Loopy Lauren Lovegood
Date: 04/17/12 22:47
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

I just read this whole book in one sitting! I absolutely loved it!
The only problem that I have is that it is finished. I want to keep on reading about Scorpius and Rose.
You are a great writer :)

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 04/09/12 20:28
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Three: And All You See Is It Fall

I haven't reviewed this story yet even though I've been reading it over the past two days, so I suppose that since I'm almost finished it would be a good thing to do. Even though this particular chapter was very serious, I laughed quite a bit when Hermione was berating Ron about wanting to keep the door open so that he could keep an eye on Rose and Scorpius. I think that this story is beautifully written, and my favorite character is Albus Potter.

Reviewer: ntoforhp
Date: 04/08/12 21:54
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Great story - well written!!!

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/03/12 16:16
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Bit abrupt, this last chapter's opening paragraphs. I anticipated a bit more interaction between the Malfoy men!

A good story...lots of interesting exchanges. Sometimes Scorpius' endearments to Rose seemed a bit odd to me; perhaps I wasn't reading them correctly, with the proper inflection, humor, or teasing attitude. Overall, nicely written.

Reviewer: foreverandalways14
Date: 04/03/12 4:06
Chapter: Chapter Three: Hogsmeade Can Be More Interesting Than You’d Expect

so much fangirl squealing at the end
I am absolutely in looove with thisssss

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/03/12 2:47
Chapter: Chapter Six: How Not To Hide A Relationship With Your Supposed Enemy

Interesting comment by Scorpius referencing family alienation. In all, this story has been quite a commentary on bigotry and idiocy. Reminds me of my own extended family...

Reviewer: Slytherin Power
Date: 10/09/11 4:15
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

It was a bit cheesy and fluffy, but I loved it, and was hooked until the end! The writing was fantastic!

Reviewer: PrincessSarah
Date: 06/22/11 23:49
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

I just wanted to let you know that I have been a lurker on this site for years and have read fanfics but this by far the best I have read. After years of not having an account I made one just to tell you how much I loved it. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! I loved it.

Reviewer: PrincessSarah
Date: 06/22/11 23:06
Chapter: Chapter One: The Book That Changed Everything

I just wanted to let you know that I have been a lurker on this site for years and have read fanfics but this by far the best I have read. After years of not having an account I made one just to tell you how much I loved it. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! I loved it.

Reviewer: Potty4Weasley
Date: 04/21/11 4:03
Chapter: Chapter Seven: What Bludgers Can Do

Aw, i am loving it so much! it's so cute, and i love the whole Weasley family part. I really like your writing style :) Are your other ones like this? Anyway, i love it!

Reviewer: dianainga
Date: 04/20/11 13:31
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

I loved all 24 are excellent! Great character and plot development. Well done!

Reviewer: CountryCutie112
Date: 01/27/11 17:11
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

I abosolutely, postivly, LOVE this story!!!!!!

Reviewer: theseventhhorcrux
Date: 11/24/10 11:54
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

I discovered this fic two days before an exam, which was probably not the best timing, as it's the internet equivalent of unputdownable! I really love Rose and Scorpius' relationship, and the fact that neither of them is perfect. I'm glad that there are some other decent Slytherin boys apart from Scorpius as well, and that you wrote in Teddy and Victoire's wedding. Thank-you for a marvelously long story, each chapter is better than the previous one :)

Reviewer: Jessabelle
Date: 11/21/10 4:47
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

Love! i really enjoyed it, started it and couldnt stop untill it was done, great distraction from exam study!

Reviewer: hermioneweasley19
Date: 11/01/10 22:01
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

I stayed up all hours of the night two nights in a row to read this fic. I loved it! The plot held my attention just as well as the plot in the actual HP books! I also love your fic "A Moment, A Love." I also enjoy how all of your stories' plots intertwine.

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