Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 09/02/11 12:54
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

OOOooo I'm likin' it!

Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 07/07/10 19:46
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

I love it! I want to know what happens! Please, please, please keep writing.

Reviewer: 94Hippogriffs
Date: 05/18/10 23:35
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

That's great! A little predictable, but the glass slipper was pure genius and really cute!

Reviewer: wotcher_slytherin
Date: 11/24/08 10:26
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

i love the ending! i've never read such a good cinderella spoof. nice job.

Reviewer: kysmiley5
Date: 11/13/08 21:12
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

omg, that was a perfect ending to that chapter. update soon!

Reviewer: mahogany_wand
Date: 09/19/08 20:05
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

Dun dun dunn... Awesome story so far! can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 08/19/08 14:45
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

I love your idea for this story, Cinderella was always one of my favourite fairy tales!

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 08/13/08 19:45
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

What happens next? What happens next?!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 08/12/08 17:58
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

Cool. It's going pretty well, a fun read and neat fairy-tale spin-off. Draco had an appropriately snarky moment or two, and Ginny was socially awkward in all the right places. Draco's earnestness when he returned to the library felt a little contrived, though.

Draco's gonna still have some reservations about going after her, right?

Cheers.

Reviewer: kathryn_malfoy
Date: 08/12/08 15:24
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

OH EM GEE! Okay, so I read your summary and was very intrigued. i jsut read your three chapters and I must say I loved it! It is such an amazing plot and I love how Draco acted.

I really can't wait for an update!
-Kat.

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 08/11/08 10:24
Chapter: Of Semi-Intelligent Conversations, Not-So-Permanent Escapes, and Completely Evil Sabotage

!!!!!!!!
Pansy is such a prat!!!
but Draco knows it's Ginny now!!
I hope he stays with her!!

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/07/08 12:06
Chapter: Of Obnoxious Groupies, Blaise-Less Parties, and Convincing ‘Acting’

Give me a break! So what if he is Malfoy?! He's still a good looking,um, young man. And besides no one really go tt o know him... *No he is not a fav character of mine, more like the bad boy type, which, of course, the girls go for :D*

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/07/08 11:43
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

Ella, honestly I do wish fairy tales could come through

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: olivetoes
Date: 05/20/08 18:09
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

Really good so far. Harry's a jerk, though, and I can't help thinking that it's just a little strange that Draco had to, like, kiss her to make Pansy jealous. Oh, well. It's great anyway.

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 05/12/08 19:06
Chapter: Of Obnoxious Groupies, Blaise-Less Parties, and Convincing ‘Acting’

This is such an easy, fun, brightening-my-day-with-an-update sort of story, and you're only two chapters in. The Draco/Ginny interaction made me smile, and I really like your Ginny...she's a very good actor.

I do have a few things--you're writing from sort of a third person ominiscent, so Ginny, Draco, and Pansy all got a little POV in here, but because sometimes you blended the scenes, it made it easy to forget that Draco is still thinking of her as "Ella" (nice one, by the way). Also, if Draco is kissing her in an "I don't mean it sort of way," snogging is not probably the word you were looking for--you only used it once, but it's a little misleading.

Then, simply because I'm curious...Why does Ginny bother to approach Draco? And will we get to see much more snarky, slytherin-y Draco in action? He said some not-so-nice things to Pansy, but his character has the propensity to be downright nasty.

I think my favorite thing in this chapter was the banter near the end. The dialogue was pretty smooth and convincing throughout, but particularly good there. Gonna stop now, but congrats on a enjoyable chapter and update soon! Cheers!

Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 05/11/08 22:54
Chapter: Of Obnoxious Groupies, Blaise-Less Parties, and Convincing ‘Acting’

This is such an adorable story! I love the whole Cinderella parody you have going on and I would write more, but I'm insanely tired! The only real nit-pick I have is the change of views in the beginning of this chapter. It switches very suddenly from Draco to Ginny and back and even entangles the two once which makes for choppy reading and a slightly confuzzled reader. Other than that--great job!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 04/24/08 12:57
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

This was such a laugh! I can see Hermione getting a kick out of the glass shoes, and Ginny not really understanding. I didn't really care for Harry, but I guess that's sort of the point.

On the off-chance Zabini was at this ball, would Ginny have a way to call in back-up and arrest him there?

Hope there's more! *bounces up and down*

Author's Response: Yep, Harry isn't very Harry-ish, but I don't think he's ever going to show up after this chapter (hmm, maybe he will…), so I hope that doesn't stop you from keeping reading. If she found Zabini, she would be able to quickly Apparate back and get reinforcements. I suppose she could think of a way to send them a message, too. There's more, don't worry! The second chapter is in queue! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Rachel_Marie
Date: 04/05/08 22:27
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

This is an incredibly entrancing story! I found myself lost within the first paragraph. I can't wait until the next part is posted!! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: lucid_dreamer
Date: 04/04/08 11:59
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

Harry's such an arse, lol. Good start, update soon :)

Author's Response: Your review made me laugh! :D Thanks!!

Reviewer: Kcharles
Date: 03/30/08 16:11
Chapter: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

Sorry, I ment first D/G

Author's Response: I figured! XD

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